In our life, we pass through many phases where we have to take decisions, sometimes for our own good and sometimes for our loved ones. Before arriving to one final decision, one should must consider all the aspect, pros, cons and consequences of the decision. I partially agree with the statement. Most of the time, our ability to take a firm decision is restricted because of overwhelmed emotions. I will further substantiate my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Most of the time, we have to take tough decision when it comes to carrier. For example, for people belonging to a rural area, due to absence of proper colleges, they have to move in order to pursue a higher degree. Here one have to take the decision to leave their family behind and to live at a far place from their home, sometimes even a different country. If one take this decision based on the emotion, it is likely that he/she will never go away from the family and will always stay at their home. This decision can be justified because of his/her closeness to the family but with t decision, the his/her future is jeopardized. So, i believe while taking these big decisions of lif, one must have to keep emotion angle aside.
Our responbilities change as we move ahead in our life. I have seen some cases where people who are not ready and lack proper arrangement tend to take extra responsibilty withpout even considering the consequences of it. For example, my friend whi is bachelor has adopted a dog influenced by emotion and without even thinking of the consequences. His reason is quite valid that the dog needed help. But, he didn't think it logically while adopitng the dog. There are many question which came up later few day, like who will feed the dog? Who will take care of him? Had he thought of this logical poitn before only, the current problem could have been avoided.
On the other side, sometimes we have to avoid the logical side while taking a decision. For example, in end days of a person life, when he/she needs the support most from the loved ones, i believe the decision taken here should be completely based on the emotions. And this decision will always be batter than the logical decision.
In the end, I agree that the most of the decision should be taken logically except few outlier cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...ness to the family but with t decision, the his/her future is jeopardized. So, i believ...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the his/her future is jeopardized. So, i believe while taking these big decision...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...valid that the dog needed help. But, he didnt think it logically while adopitng the d...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'many questions'.
Suggestion: many questions
...cally while adopitng the dog. There are many question which came up later few day, like who w...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun day seems to be countable; consider using: 'few days'.
Suggestion: few days
...e are many question which came up later few day, like who will feed the dog? Who will t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urrent problem could have been avoided. On the other side, sometimes we have to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s the support most from the loved ones, i believe the decision taken here should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67321867322 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47690952669 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523341523342 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4257119326 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6956521739 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6956521739 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.34782608696 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21613004258 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651724625561 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551929187835 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131762921373 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577860935422 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.