Every one of us has faced moments in their lives where it is a scenario of heart vs mind or emotion vs logic.One of the many threads that run between successful people is their ability to make different or difficult decisions. A camp of people believe that these decisions should be made with logic while another believe that it is necessary to follow your heart. There is another group, which makes emotional decisions and later justifies them with logic. Which one is correct?
If history is to be believed, there are numerous stories of people who let emotion take the reins. Bill Gates famously dropped out of a prestigious institute like Harvard to found Microsoft. This decision, then seemed illogical to any sensible person. But in hindsight, it gave the world one revolutionary product in the form of PC.
Would Bill Gates be considered a poor decision maker because he let his emotion or passion drive his life?
It was when logic warned against it, that Elon Musk decide to invest his last dollar into SpaceX and Tesla. A safer option would have been to wait till his finances were stronger to incur such an investment.
Would history name Elon Musk , one of the greatest technological innovators, a poor decision maker? It was his emotion, which could later be justified by the resounding and pioneering success of both his companies that paints him as a man not afraid to make the tough decisions.
Keeping the professional decisions aside, one case where emotional decisions are rampart is choosing a life partner. Romance is seldom dominated or characterized by astute logic. Increase in the number of divorces show that letting your heart decide who to spend your life with might not always be the best choice. However, does letting logic decide guarantee a better outcome?
Clearly, making decisions is tough when the consequences are unpredictable. Some instances like investment, careers, job changes, or even marriage requires one to be logical. However, trusting your gut and leaping has its merits too. In the end, it is a person who knows when to let the heart decide and when to let logic influence the decision who is the good decision maker.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94550408719 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61423636005 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577656675749 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.785086352 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4285714286 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340762890626 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952085481361 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106053086369 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155350547176 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877452254536 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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