People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statements says that usually people who try to use logic to demonstrate that decisions influenced by emotion were right usually make wrong decision. In my opinion this is generally true, and these people shouldn't have much credibility.
First of all, in many cases the fact that people justify their impulse with logic are just liying to themselves, and are therefore unable to understand that they are in fault. A friend of mine after highschool decided to enroll in a course for engineering despite not being good in maths, and tried to convince everyone that it would be the best choice because it is a sector in which it's easy to find a job. The truth was probably that he was so frustrated that he couldn't do well on scientific subjects at school that he unconsciously wanted to prove himself that he could do it at the university, but in the end he failed and wasted two years and thousands of euros.
Another problem is that usually people like of such kind think they are always right and don't want people to tell them what would have been better, therefore these people are not able to learn from their mistakes and will keep making them. An example can be seen in imperator Caligola, who thought he was a god and had the right to rule without any help, but in the end made so many wrong decisions (he even ordered his soldiers to swing their swords against the sea because he felt that Neptune offended him in some way) that in the end his Pretorians had to kill him to save Rome.
Of course sometimes it's better to use emotions rather than logic, for example when the issue regards human lives and their feelings, however it would be controversial anyway to try to justify these decisions through logic.
The last reason why I wouldn't listen to what these kind of people suggest is the fact that they don't think about the consequences of their actions. They pretend to have thought of what would happen after they take a decision, but all their words are just lies: emotions are often misleading and bring us to do things that we would never even think of if we have the possibility to analyze the situation, like committing a crime.
In conclusion, for these motivations I think that someone who prefers emotions over logic when making decisions, but doesn't want to admit it, will never be able to choose the best option, and thus should let the Others take such a responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, of course, first of all, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6191588785 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43320678113 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8006314118 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.727272727 118.986275619 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.9090909091 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4545454545 5.21951772744 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149644696409 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627564596629 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522214195451 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856681140267 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435328971725 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 14.1392134831 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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