People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People who make decisions initially on the basis of emotion and then justify it using logic are no doubted the most poor decision makers. The decision taken on the basis of emotion are not always based on pure logic, they are generally distorted by emotions, which can sometimes be fatal.
People who makes decision using emotion generally don't consider the facts revolving around the situation and often take decisions as per their heart. This type of decision making is very dangerous in professional spheres of life, where a single decision can cost several lives or could result in serious financial or any other form of crisis. There are several anecdotes which portray emotional decision making as dangerous. A famous example would be the second world war. Adolf Hitler, when waging the second world war was warned by his most close associates that waging the second world war would cause serious damages to German Economy, which had just stabilised after the first world war. However, Hitler decided to follow his emotions and ambitions in making Germany a supreme power and decided to wage the war. After he waged the war, he gave logic that Germany would win very soon and would become prosperous again after winning the war. But as time passed the situation became more grim and eventually the consequence of this poor decision led to widespread bloodshed. Thus, a poor decision led to the loss of several thousand lives including his own.
However, there are situations, when decisions taken emotionally and justified later are not poor decisions. There are several occasions in which within a family a child gets distracted and ends up going with the wrong company, ends up doing something mischievous. Father even though knowing that it is wrong and logically his child should be in prison for his deeds, decides to protect his child out of his emotions. As a result, sometimes the father takes the blame of his child on himself and goes to prison, just in order to protect his child's career. Hence, even though it seems a like a wrong decision, but if we analyse the situation, then this was not a wrong decision on father's end.
Hence, people who take decisions emotionally and justify those decisions afterwards with logic are definitely the poorest decision makers and leads to catastrophic outcomes. However, there are indeed some decisions, which when taken emotionally cannot be justified as poor or wrong, especially the ones involving our loved ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'no doubt', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230088495575 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.16814159292 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0929203539823 0.0880659088768 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0774336283186 0.0497285424764 156% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0420353982301 0.0444667217837 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0973451327434 0.12292977631 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0508849557522 0.0406280797675 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4711884897 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0199115044248 0.030933414821 64% => OK
Particles: 0.00442477876106 0.0016655270985 266% => OK
Determiners: 0.0862831858407 0.0997080785238 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0199115044248 0.0249443105267 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0265486725664 0.0148568991511 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2478.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 412.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0145631068 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359223300971 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257281553398 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169902912621 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126213592233 0.132149295362 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4711884897 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 59.1003339721 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8888888889 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2138801327 59.4972553346 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 141.124799967 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.674092028746 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 48.6170442287 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.31538461538 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434465104458 0.391690518653 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.1460196041 0.123202303941 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.124099275947 0.077325440228 160% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492778165454 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155742862941 0.149214159877 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16545174587 0.161403998019 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972365894686 0.0892212321368 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.300985955953 0.385218514788 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0175497464657 0.0692045440612 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322517049125 0.275328986314 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656193625385 0.0653680567796 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.30420353982 283% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 14.0 3.66592920354 382% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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