It is always seen that a person's attitude, his way of tackling situations and going through multifaceted circumstances stand on the base of his basic understanding of the society in which his upbringing has been done. Then there come such situations in which a person shows his immediate reactions depending on basic human behavior that could be seen in every human being we meet. It can be his enragement, it can be his exhilaration, or it can be his incendiary manifestations. But all his diverse nature of attitude which is reflected on the basis of situations correlating with them comes with the extent of thinking of his own self that he has been developing from his childhood living in the society which molds him and becomes the foundation of his mindset.
It is said that to check a person’s level of calmness and his poised nature, we should be seeing those reactions of his attitude towards any immediate and impromptu situations. For example, many of the great leaders reigning in our world like the prime minister of India Mr. Narendra Modi who has the responsibility of the entire country come across multifarious situations that require the skill of immediate decision making and performing action towards that circumstance. His one decision which surrounds the lives and betterment of billions of people around him cannot afford him to show any arbitrary reaction of his personal outrage or become frenetic during such disturbing situations. That time his reaction depends solely on the way of his level of thinking which is developed by him in living that same society for whom he is working today.
Many great CEO’s who run very vast business companies react to the immediate situations on the basis of their learning and how they have shaped there mental thinking. It depends on the person to shape his mind with positive aspirations and affirmations instead of negative ones. Today people practice yoga, do meditation, and go for hours reading good books just to make themselves and their mental state to be more penetrating and positive. This is the society that tells a person living amongst it to be well known about different kinds of ordeals that he is going to tackle and face in his future. The education system, the family surrounding, the economic circumstances everything becomes a part of bringing these major diversification of reactions that a person shows towards any trails or adverse situations.
There are some people who are not satisfied even after becoming the wealthiest person and then there are those who feel elated with simple and minute scenarios. All these reactions depend only on that person’s mindset. There are some people who fight for there rights and content for what they believe and then there are those who do not care about anything right or wrong and just follow what they are said to follow. For example, Nadia Murad who is lionized by the Nobel prize award for going through the hell of terrorism and ordeals of facing men harrowing her now works for the betterment of other girls who go through such mental and physical harassment. After pulverizing her trauma not only she became more powerful women then she was earlier, but now she inspires other women to fight for there belief and still be strong and happy. She made her attitude by hailing herself to withstand such immediate situations that came into her life at the age of just 25. She would have never thought of going through such a devastating phase of her life but at the end of the day she became stronger and reacted in a way she has developed her mind to be. As most of the other cases are seen where women commit suicide after coming to such a situation. This also happens because of the society in which they are living. Some encourage her to fight for it and some reproach her to be a spoiler of their so-called society.
Therefore, a person's immediate reaction is always decided by his nature of seeing into that situation. Some take it as another exam that they have to go through in order to succeed and other just think why this happens only to them. The surrounding in which a person lives play a very pivotal role in building his mindset and molding him in the shape of a person who he is now. His family, peers, level of education, social media, and even work culture everything plays a part to shape a person’s thinking and his reaction towards any future auspicious or unauspicious situations.
- CLAIM: The importance of multidisciplinary education is overrated in todays times.REASON: Education should be focused on preparation for a specific career path and thus students should be encouraged to only pursue a single area of study. 66
- The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting you 50
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Mi 72
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in an 26
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
It is always seen that a persons attitude, his way of tackling situation...
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Line 7, column 736, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...not only she became more powerful women then she was earlier, but now she inspires o...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...their so-called society. Therefore, a persons immediate reaction is always decided by...
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Line 9, column 528, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... person's thinking and his reaction towards any future auspicious or unauspi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 34.0 11.3162921348 300% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 94.0 33.0505617978 284% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3703.0 2235.4752809 166% => OK
No of words: 764.0 442.535393258 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84685863874 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.25742807104 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66771106271 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 337.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44109947644 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1160.1 704.065955056 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7524858652 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.148148148 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2962962963 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127742014781 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424526999758 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367077501429 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817999285895 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259095796477 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 100.480337079 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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