People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
A persons major part of the day is spent interacting with the society, people at large. One is more a public person than a private. There are many factors that influence the person’s behavior rather determine his actions. Let it be workplace or the government ruling or the educational system he has been into. Right from the younger days he has been following the norms of the society with or without his intervention. Which is sad as the opinion of a person is curtailed right from the younger days.
Beginning with, the political forces and the ruling government policies, which might not be accepted by all the people in the country for the reasons best known to them. Yes, it is true that the people have selected the government but it is not necessary that they are pro government for what all steps they take. Few decisions of the government are some of the times against a class of people. For example, the decision of the government to split the state of AndhraPradesh into two is a decision took by the government all by itself which has not considered the opinion of the public. Though it was the wish of the people in Telangana, people of Andhra were against it, which makes the decision unbalanced.
Adding up, as a county has a diversified cultures it so it is impossible for all of them to get satisfied. There are other factors like the norms of the society which are to be followed right from the younger days, it is true that the norms are for the welfare of the people, but it also hinders the freedom of a person in many ways. Here the opinion of a person plays a minor role and the opinion of the society plays a major role.
In contrast, there are many terms which a person has his own choice to make, like which school to join, which government to select, who to marry, how to spend his money etc. A person’s life has many things to be considered. Sometimes even though he feels he has various choices there are not as many as they apparently seem to be.
There are pros and cons for every topic, the same way a person’s life is determined by many terms of the society leaving his/her choices not noticed, which is unfortunate. But he has been given the freedom of speech, freedom for many things which is also to be considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: A person; Persons
A persons major part of the day is spent interact...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more public'?
Suggestion: a more public
...th the society, people at large. One is more a public person than a private. There are many f...
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Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ciety with or without his intervention. Which is sad as the opinion of a person is cu...
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Line 1, column 508, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... curtailed right from the younger days. Beginning with, the political forces and...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ke. Few decisions of the government are some of the times against a class of people. For ex...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as many as they apparently seem to be. There are pros and cons for every topic,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'apparently', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'in contrast', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208242950108 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.169197396963 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0780911062907 0.0880659088768 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0412147505423 0.0497285424764 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0520607375271 0.0444667217837 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127982646421 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0433839479393 0.0406280797675 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55852760076 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260303687636 0.030933414821 84% => OK
Particles: 0.00216919739696 0.0016655270985 130% => OK
Determiners: 0.130151843818 0.0997080785238 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00216919739696 0.0249443105267 9% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0281995661605 0.0148568991511 190% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2279.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 412.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53155339806 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276699029126 0.366273622748 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206310679612 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123786407767 0.200843997647 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0922330097087 0.132149295362 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55852760076 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43932038835 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.0211279004 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6842105263 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3342566854 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.947368421 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.674092028746 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 42.3152784875 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.44628099174 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170173277324 0.391690518653 43% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.167318153706 0.123202303941 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100099484964 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.607830426067 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158079751886 0.149214159877 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079711574947 0.161403998019 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472482153037 0.0892212321368 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.404765350898 0.385218514788 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.194224736642 0.0692045440612 281% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115014611735 0.275328986314 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500266800223 0.0653680567796 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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