Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Higher studies play a predominant role in a student’s education. Students are free to select their field of interest in the respective universities. They follow the subjects amended by the universities.It is also necessary to study variety of courses in order to cope up with the ever changing world.Every field in interdependent with one another, which marks a requirement for a student to know about what other fields deal with.
Further, for any research work or any new invention to be done by an amateur he/she has to be expertise in the fields related to the work.That is, knowing his part wouldn’t solve the issue.For example, for a person to invent a car he needs knowledge of mechanical engineering and electronics engineering, without which the invention seems to be absurd.
Building up, as universities help the students to gain knowledge in their field of interest, it is also needed for them to take up lead in helping the students to know much more of which would be of great use to them.It is also a bit hectic and deviant for them to concentrate on many at once. And might also lessen their scores in their core subjects but it marks a great advantage in the future course.
Every field is interdependent as mentioned. Every individual should have an overall knowledge on the subject and just not their part.University develops a student in many facets.There is also a necessity for them to concentrate on developing their overall knowledge.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22962962963 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.159259259259 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851851851852 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0407407407407 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0518518518519 0.0444667217837 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12962962963 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0406280797675 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10475902352 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0555555555556 0.030933414821 180% => OK
Particles: 0.0111111111111 0.0016655270985 667% => OK
Determiners: 0.107407407407 0.0997080785238 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0111111111111 0.0249443105267 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148148148148 0.0148568991511 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1488.0 2732.02544248 54% => OK
No of words: 247.0 452.878318584 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02429149798 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327935222672 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271255060729 0.280924506359 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198380566802 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145748987854 0.132149295362 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10475902352 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 219.290929204 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.48968727796 118% => OK
Word variations: 58.248205842 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 30.875 23.380412469 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.030900089 59.4972553346 190% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.0 141.124799967 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 23.380412469 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 58.0005060729 51.4728631049 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.57352941176 1.64882698954 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3328457039 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137758627425 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0960918675452 0.077325440228 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.667740777757 0.547984918172 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.261721956457 0.149214159877 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157783979878 0.161403998019 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818803789384 0.0892212321368 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298064967035 0.385218514788 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0113054120107 0.0692045440612 16% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211622572365 0.275328986314 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092643798634 0.0653680567796 142% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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