People are social being. Their behaviour can alter and amplify according to the society, situation they are going through and other factors. The prompt states that people`s behaviour is largely determined by the forces not of their own making. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the statement and here are the reasons.
To begin with, people`s life are bounded with so many circumstances. They have to live their life confined within certain limit. Like in a family, a parents have to look after their children and their older parents too.The father of a family can`t just behave on his own and do whatever he likes. There exist some kind of force that doesn`t permit him to do all the things he want in his life.He has to be a role model for his childrens and bear certain responsibilities towards society too.
Secondly, in this world, no body have freedom to choose what they want to do. They are dragged by certain forces to move further in their life. To persue happiness and so called success, they work so hard that their relative behaviour with other people definately changes. And that behaviour certainly brings changes in their life. Let us talk about a child. As the time passes by, he grows up and he has to obey his parent`s advice. go to school, make friends and sos many things. He can`t just sit and say i don`t want to go to school, i don`t want to make friends etc. In order to adjust himself in this society, he has to behave in other way. So, his behaviour is shaped accordingly to the external forces that exist.
However, behaviour that are shaped with forces can sometime be dangerous. People must have right to act freely and accordingly. As we can see in today`s society, most people are preferring to live their life according to their will and their behaviour are changing accordingly.
In sum, we can say that this kind of force have both pros and cons. As people`s life are better with this forces too as they have shaped their behaviour towards better things and in some cases, we can see the impact is reverse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e are social being. Their behaviour can alter and amplify according to the soci...
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...d cons. As people's life are better with this forces too as they have shaped...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, kind of, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76712328767 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61452845734 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495890410959 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3264570937 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.652173913 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8695652174 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160838406411 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552018808707 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054381827066 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114821316378 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462475425364 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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