People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
The author of this statement claims that the driving force behind people's behavior is not determined by their own makings. due to some cogent reason I agree also agree to his claim.
human is a social creature it requires to interact with others. humans live in a symbiosis relationship and hence, the nature of human's behavior is largely affected by its surroundings and less by its own makings. For example- if a man is having a good day and have done great deeds but he might become churlish if someone say a begger keep on goading him for money. Here his behavior was determined by the external factor "begger", though he was having a good day and was in a good mood but the external factor changed his behavior.
In the realm of business also, if a man is working too hard to achieve say promotion, he might not get one because of myriad of reasons which are not in his control like vacancy for that job title or any other obstacle. due to these factors which are not in his control he might not get what he wants and due to this he might become unhappy and this would certainly affect his behavior.
Talking about other areas also, the situation is same. Be it politics or government. human's behavior is highly susceptible to external factors and not by his own makings. For example- if a man is working hard day and night and also is magnanimous but he might get irritated by few who envy him.
there are also people like sages who are inured to external forces and their behavior is largely determined by their own makings. Not only sages but there are few who have that blissful nature which does not get affected by external forces. but there are very few of those who have such mastery of not getting affected and be calm.
In sum, due to the factors which are not in our hands makes human behavior more susceptible to forces not of own makings rather some external factors. hence. author's contention is apposite to a large extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60339943343 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47716501102 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458923512748 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9419915707 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148179379483 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614413494756 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113511392557 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986033271619 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079053146292 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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