Does anyone in his or her senses knowingly commit a crime just for the heck of it? Is there a way to know if someone committed a crime on what grounds? What were the circumstances that led someone to do the do the evil deed? I guess one might not know if only looked at the crime and not the whole story behind it. Therefore, there are trials and judges and jury to decide if the person committing a crime is truly guilty of what he did and is indicted accordingly. Even though infringing should not be an acceptable societal norm, I believe that a criminal should not be devoid of his or her civil rights and the benefit from his or her labor.
For instance, we say a poor father steals money from somebody and even though he regrets doing it, he is hapless to do so because he has to feed his family and is unable to because of having no job and/or is not able to provide for his whole family beacause of the meagre salary he is getting. In this case, how is one going to decide the penalty on him? At the end of the day, he is a father and did whatever he could to provide for his family and the need and responsibility to do so led him to the lengths of violating the law and his rectitude.
Another instance of why a person should be able to retain his rights and the fruit of his labor is because people who unknowingly commit a crime are also given a chance to fight for themselves and prove themselves innocent in the eyes of law and the society. A crime is a crime, whether it is committed knowingly or unknowingly so why the latter people should be treated any different than their former counterparts.
More so, recidivists and criminals already behind bars are also given a chance to have a lawyer that can deal with the matters of law and can apply for bails and other pleas to the court of law. And even in jails, criminals are allowed to earn by working with different things like carpentry, painting, etc. So, everybody gets an equal chance to speak up and put forth a plea or a case of being innocent and it has been like that from ages.
Therefore in my opinion, it would be unfair to revoke a person's civil rights and the right to benefit from their own labor when knowingly committing a crime and breaking a social contract should be considered very deeply before acting on and every account and perspective of his offense should be taken into consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'do the'.
Suggestion: do the
...e the circumstances that led someone to do the do the evil deed? I guess one might not know i...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he circumstances that led someone to do the do the evil deed? I guess one might not kn...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ility to do so led him to the lengths of violating the law and his rectitude. ...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... people should be treated any different than their former counterparts. More so, ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...and it has been like that from ages. Therefore in my opinion, it would be unfair to re...
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Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...y opinion, it would be unfair to revoke a persons civil rights and the right to benefit f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, look, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i guess, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35346756152 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4504723214 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487695749441 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2502751813 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.733333333 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375950566414 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115730295924 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121015173628 0.0758088955206 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21568778158 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155034485591 0.0667264976115 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.