Crime in my opinion,in simple terms is violation of other's rights.However these rights of people qare defined by the laws of country.We consider thse laws are made to maintain the order and peace in the society.Although the prompt mentions that if the crime is commited knowingly,it is not clear what kind of knowlege,the prompt it is discussing about.Relevant to the context,I believe ,if the person is aware of the consequences and the laws violated during that action,then only I beleive he can be thought to be a criminal by his choice or rather knowingly.Neverthless,removing his rights for the action is not justifiable,supposedly if these are the basic human rights we are talking about.Apart from that it seems unjustified to behest someone form right to benifit frojm his own labour due to his crime,because removing the rights of this kind will not act as punishment.
First,I beleive hte prompt is unclear about what kind of knowlege we are discussing about when the crime is done while mentioning "knowingly''.eventhough if we are considering it to be awareness of laws and possible ramifications of commiteed crime on society.It is not justifiable that the person should be banished from his rights.Some jails in world actually help the criminal to get to the better path,by helping the criminals spiritually.For example jails in maerical provide the criminals with this kind of facilty to improve themselves.While working on ourselves certainly will rquire them to have certain civil rights,like freedom of expression and so on.So just because a person has commited a crime it is uunreasonable to behold the person from all civil rights.
Secondly,the prompt does not mention about what are the contents of civil right,which I believe can varycountry to country accordingly.That is some country might support certain rights which other countries do not.For example arabian countries do not provide the right to dirve to females.Although it seems unreasonable,the citizens of their must pertain to those laws,but commiting a crime like driving a car should not result into banishment into your all civil rights.What I mean to say that the extent of removal of rights should be determined on the basis of severity of crime too whether it is unknowingly or not is different matter.
However,I agree that laws are made to curb the crime by givng the punishment to miscreants.that the law must be uphold for the society's own good only.But laws which banishes all civil right-might include basic human rights too is unreasonable.
Apart from that the prompt mentions that while commiting a crime if the person is doing a crim knowingly he is breaking the social contract,although it is not mentioned whether this social contract is legally enforcalbe or it is just set of codes which need to be followed by people.In the later case,I beleive there are certain unreasonable set of standards in the contract,which might not be enforcible by law for example,multiple marriages in india is considered a crime by the supposed social contract,it is not legally enforcalbe.Therefore the defining the crime itself becomes a big deal,although I beleive it is violation of human right,the presented example don't seem to reflect that in any manner.therefore providing a punishment based on social contract isunjustified.
Finally,I beleive that extent to which rights of a criminal should be abolished,should be determined by the severity of crime.In addition it should be clear whether the crime was done by a person who was aware of consequences as well as laws.T
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'actually', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'i mean', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'talking about', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215926493109 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.199081163859 0.157235817809 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0842266462481 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535987748851 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0566615620214 0.0444667217837 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128637059724 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0581929555896 0.0406280797675 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.76954024364 2.79330140395 135% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0336906584992 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102603369066 0.0997080785238 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0229709035222 0.0249443105267 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0199081163859 0.0148568991511 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3608.0 2732.02544248 132% => OK
No of words: 575.0 452.878318584 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2747826087 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.58838876751 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365217391304 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285217391304 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201739130435 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147826086957 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76954024364 2.79330140395 135% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 219.290929204 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462608695652 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.4961156206 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 95.8333333333 23.380412469 410% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 258.107212866 59.4972553346 434% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 601.333333333 141.124799967 426% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 95.8333333333 23.380412469 410% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 0.674092028746 544% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 51.0 5.21349557522 978% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 124.355072464 51.4728631049 242% => OK
Elegance: 1.30198019802 1.64882698954 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370001579178 0.391690518653 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.344386364002 0.123202303941 280% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108586504341 0.077325440228 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.81298660735e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246587051323 0.161403998019 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487707373123 0.0892212321368 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.417247193431 0.385218514788 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.124738390476 0.0692045440612 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246587051323 0.275328986314 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487707373123 0.0653680567796 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.4325221239 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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