is pet necessary
Few pupils feel having a pet is great for kids, On the other hand, others feel it is threatening or causes poor health. Pets bring so much joy into our lives. In the following paragraphs, both views are discussed.
There are many advantages of being a pet owner. To begin with, they keep you fit which directly affects the health of an individual. For instance, all breeds of dogs need regular and daily walks in order to stay happy and healthy, so do we! If you own a furry friend you have to take them to parks by this way you get the necessary exercise needed for you to be fit as a fiddle. In addition to it, they teach you a sense of responsibility by making sure you are independent, confidant, and be accountable for your actions. To illustrate this, I recently gifted my niece a doggy, she now cleans the cage, feeds it on time which are all the signs of being responsible. Lastly, having a pet lowers your stress level. The modern lifestyle is filled with anxiety and is stressful most of the time. Luckily pets help us to relax. For instance, watching your fish swim around the tank melts your worries. It is proven that pet owners have less blood pressure, cholesterol, and triglyceride level.
On the other hand, these animals be may dangerous to life. For example, there are shreds of evidence of kids being bitten by rabid canines, leading to the loss of their life. Because the minors won’t realize the danger and get close to them. As a result, it is best to keep the toddlers away from them.
All in all, it is obvious that there are more advantages of owning fish, cats, or dogs. The person will be more happy and lively compared to before if he owns a pet.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44660194175 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40637465398 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8803729397 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3157894737 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190517793173 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585402300149 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744379534362 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967672488289 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632753437089 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 14.1392134831 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 12.1639044944 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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