The population on Balmer Island doubles during the summer months. During the summer, then, the town council of Balmer Island should decrease the maximum number of moped rentals allowed at each of the island's six moped and bicycle rental companies from 50 per day to 30 per day. This will significantly reduce the number of summertime accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians. The neighboring island of Torseau actually saw a 50 percent reduction in moped accidents last year when Torseau's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals. To help reduce moped accidents, therefore, we should also enforce these limitations during the summer months.
The argument coclude that the during summer month the maximum number of the moped rentals decreses to help to reduse the moped accident . To support this conclusion the developer give the explanation that the compare the balmar island with torseau island moped accident however the argument fails to account of the several other possible explanation
firstly ,the argument stated that the population on balmer island dobale during the summer month so the maximum number of moped rental is decrese at the summer month and also contain that the the island have six moped and bicycle companies . the author not to explain that the six moped rental companies is enough for the island and the author also not the contain the population of the islaand. how can wwe know that the six moped rentals companies is enogh for the island.
secondly, the author stated that the redusong moped rentals is reduse the accident of the moped and padestrian but the number of accident also increse because of the population of island is double in summer month . the author also stated that to reduce the maximum number of the bicycle rental but the bicycle is not create the major accident so the bicycle completely not responsible for the moped and pedestrains accident.
Thirdly ,the author compare the accident percenteges to the other island but the author also not mention that in the summer month the population in torseau island is increse or double . And author also not mention the population in the torseau island and the mopeds and bicycle rentals companies. the author also stated that the accident is reduce 50 percent in last year but the data is also not represent this year data .
In sum , the developer have to put forward to support the argument. and the developer provide the more compelling explination for support the argument.to specify the author argument author need to more evaluted data , author need to explain the population of the both island and also need to explain that the population of island increse is the result to increse the accident.
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- The population on Balmer Island doubles during the summer months. During the summer, then, the town council of Balmer Island should decrease the maximum number of moped rentals allowed at each of the island's six moped and bicycle rental companies from 50 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.296398891967 0.240241500013 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.135734072022 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0664819944598 0.0880659088768 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0664819944598 0.0497285424764 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0444667217837 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.113573407202 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.00277008310249 0.0406280797675 7% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.40408564247 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0360110803324 0.030933414821 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.182825484765 0.0997080785238 183% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00277008310249 0.0249443105267 11% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00277008310249 0.0148568991511 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2057.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 352.0 452.878318584 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84375 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40625 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255681818182 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.130681818182 0.200843997647 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0852272727273 0.132149295362 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40408564247 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 219.290929204 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.306818181818 0.48968727796 63% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 31.942610018 55.4138127331 58% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.380412469 137% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.658627918 59.4972553346 181% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.0 141.124799967 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.380412469 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.21349557522 422% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 57.5681818182 51.4728631049 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.04109589041 1.64882698954 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.633715415079 0.391690518653 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.36907716578 0.123202303941 300% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.143301257798 0.077325440228 185% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.839348927188 0.547984918172 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0950409079218 0.149214159877 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.419935094744 0.161403998019 260% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136960245896 0.0892212321368 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.686371108011 0.385218514788 178% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0601322667137 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.512655927393 0.275328986314 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107270725495 0.0653680567796 164% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.4325221239 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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