The Primarily Goal OfTechnological Advancement Should be to to increase people efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time "
This statement contends that the primarily Goal of advancement in technology should be to increase efficiency of peopkle so that aal people get more leisure time.
The more technology increases more people get engage in different works and get income in their family and due to this there is incease in overall economy of the people.
Yes i agree with the statement and due to this there is much more increase leisure time.
one of the effective reason is also this is more increase in advancement in technology more people get busy and lessen the leisure time and people get engage
more and more in technology.This actual oppose the stement is and due to this there is less leisure time of people get.Advance in technology there is more and more increase
in average income of people in country.
The other specific reason is that people get knowledgeable more and more by increasing in technology and more broader the mind to accept belief rather than reject
wrong belief as narrow mind people usually do and due to this more and more people get more wise.by the use of more using of technology people get more know in detail the latest
changing in the world and about different big revolutionaries changes happens in world.
The more use of technology by educating students they are getting rid through education and focus on games and uses other social sites.by doing this they destroy their
carrer by sticking more to technology.There is more and more increase in technology people get less leisure time instaead of more.So there is different causes to the different tyes
of usses of technology.
In sum i conclude that there both sides of use of technology god and bad.It can depend on the type of u need. bye the increase in technology less lesiure time get to
the people instead of more. The argument fails to sound persuasive enough due to various loopholes in the assumptions provided by the arguer.
- The Primarily Goal OfTechnological Advancement Should be to to increase people efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time " 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89361702128 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64728903689 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425531914894 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.551410944 60.3974514979 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.888888889 118.986275619 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5555555556 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.97078651685 282% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349062663925 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192066550847 0.0831039109588 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157907276754 0.0758088955206 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157938988726 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142776162464 0.0667264976115 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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