The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Today's world observe numerous deaths of well-known names which are deep-seated in music sector. Some groups of real fan follow them through their all life but to some extent, they become public figure, accordingly, supporting and talking about their death become a way of expression of sensibility, catching up and reaching popular culture. In my opinion, this notion is more widespread than true mourning of their real loyal fans.
As we know, being famous bring about melancholic emotions so that we observe some suicides due to these psychological distortions. These examples sometimes due to bohemian deep spiritual conditions or drug abuse. However, this type of deaths result in great deal of speculation and rumours, hence, death of that famous person become more well-known and reach more people. For instance, suicide of Amy Winehouse became iconic further than real reason behind it. Some majorities have transformed her into an icon of new wave of Jazz soul music which arise from symbolization as a freedom of a women by means of her reckless lifestyle and victim of cruel and presumptious critics. Furthermore, we saw same another situation in the death o Kurt Cobain, who is lead vocal of Nirvana, becamo symbol of grunge music and victim of cruel ad selfish world. This illustrates that this assesement is beyond the quality of the music.
While some real fans feel real grief, some opportunist focus on perceptions of people, hence, they just keep their role in front of societ in order to seem sensible. Another case of this situation, even they do not listen them previously, they see it online and become fan just in the ai of getting popularity. For instance, death of Chris Cornell who has died recently in June, is an illustration for this case. Many people have started to listen him after his death, followingly, they have started to examine his music, posted online. This is far more honest assesment, that is, these are just a group of people who wear masks and willing to be acceptal by society.
On the other hand, we observe cases in which assesment and mourning after their deaths goes beyond its factual breath-taking, deep seated reputation. As we all remember, after Michael Jackson's death, all world felt into grief, everybody shared the same feeling that world has lost a star which changes all dogmatic ideologies about humanity and world music. Hence, no one can deny that assessments after his death is not phony, specifically, these are real tears and applauds due to his iconoclastic style.
In conclusion, all examples considered, I agree with the statement that most of assessment are phony and strategical in case of loss of a famous people, nonethless, we have examples on the contrary as mentioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 456.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04385964912 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69419653757 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9664931512 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.052631579 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0858187964328 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280586144764 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272872814179 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488908747997 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125871660564 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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