The prompt maintains that scandals are useful for public to focus their attention in a way that no other leaders or reformer could ever had influenced. I agree with the statement as scandals are nowadays useful to induce an unprecedented way in which the problems can arise among the society. Infact, It can be the best tool to learn about the nuances of the problem. Nuances like the origin of the problem, politicians or people involved, the mafia behind the scene and the ways it affects the public.
Firstly, scandals are happening around the globe predominantly with the political and economical profile. Once a mismanaged government involved in a scandal, it totally destroys its' citizens' trust. Thus, people can thoroughly learn about the roots of the mismanagement which can create awareness on the ruling party and its' administration. Scandals are committed for both political and financial gains without considering the society it affected. Whenever a society is proliferated with false propagandas and assurances, it is more susceptible to bribery and corruption. The people involved in the scandal cannot reconcile the fame they spoiled. They are subjected to all level of defamation. For example, the Bhorpus and Raphael scandal in India is one such case where the government is still unable to wipe away it's dust out of the case. The venality circumstances prevails all over the world.
Moreover, scandal can be of any betrayal act against the law and justice.Unfortunately, People are so guillous that scandals are revealed only at the cusp of it's judgement. Media plays a vital role in exposing any kind of scandals with proper proofs and evidences. Hence, it is difficult for the persons involved in the scandal to vindicate themselves against the ordeal.
Nowadays, public is aware about odds and evens about all the exposed scandals. It has been of great reformation to the society. It aids people to choose the best over the worst leader; the reality over the fanatics; true patriotism over the jingoism.Apparently, scandals pave way for the betterment of the country and its' nationals. It plays a key role in choosing the true leader and never fall for the spurious speeches delivered during the election propaganda.
To summarize, scandals or mistakes helps the public forecast about their future leaders and cast their votes for the betterment of their nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Unfortunately
...etrayal act against the law and justice.Unfortunately, People are so guillous that scandals a...
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Suggestion: Apparently
...tics; true patriotism over the jingoism.Apparently, scandals pave way for the betterment o...
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Suggestion:
...s for the betterment of their nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15979381443 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97542811952 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541237113402 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8625260079 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223420017036 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627907525399 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084245049199 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117103577901 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11376247543 0.0667264976115 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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