Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
"It is only through the mistakes one learns."
A scandal is a negative subject, when it comes into occurrence it shocks and shakes the community due to the immorality and wretchedness of it. It opens the eyes of the society the time it takes place and as its consequence each and every individual, victim to the common people all undergoes grave repercussions. Although the inimical nature of scandals, they provide people to learn from these awful events.
We are living in the 21st century, where scams, corruption and many other events similar to these are part of our life. Everyday or so in newspapers, television, internet, etc, a news is seen reporting about such incidents. In my view, when a group of people in a society attempt these ill activities in succession, it gives rise to a horrendous event termed "Scandal." When a scandal takes place it creates a feeling of utter dismay within the people. For example, an official of Crime Investigation Department of India, in his greed cleared all the evidence against the convicted criminal and when his reality came in front it shocked people, that an official of such reputed organization committed such treachery.
Despite the deleterious effects that a scandal possess over the society, it acts as a wake-up call to the public. After its occurrence people becomes more aware, more aware of the aberrant activities that surrounds them. This cynical thought process of people sometimes really helps preventing a scandal to occur. Reformers or Speaker are the people who teaches moral values to the society as well as practice them and opens the eyes of many with their rhetoric nature. But, the edification by a reformer is mere theoretical to most of the people whereas, the learning from a scandal is much more objective. After the
To conclude I would suggest, for a scandal to not happen in a society every person in it needs to be a morally good person, which is completely unattainable. Thus, we need to be always mentally prepared to face these ill incidents and to learn from them, rather maledicting them. Scandals in these modern times are occurring everywhere, in every sector we lay our brain in. We just need to accept them and then quickly find a solution to it, so that its re-occurrence could be forestalled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... similar to these are part of our life. Everyday or so in newspapers, television, intern...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
... newspapers, television, internet, etc, a news is seen reporting about such incidents....
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Line 6, column 284, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to prevent' or 'prevent'.
Suggestion: to prevent; prevent
...rocess of people sometimes really helps preventing a scandal to occur. Reformers or Speake...
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Line 6, column 609, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... from a scandal is much more objective. After the To conclude I would suggest, fo...
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Line 6, column 618, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...candal is much more objective. After the To conclude I would suggest, for a scand...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'as well as', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238636363636 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.127272727273 0.157235817809 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0772727272727 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0727272727273 0.0444667217837 164% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.109090909091 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0181818181818 0.0406280797675 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.89289973938 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0386363636364 0.030933414821 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120454545455 0.0997080785238 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00454545454545 0.0249443105267 18% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0181818181818 0.0148568991511 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2311.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 388.0 452.878318584 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95618556701 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35824742268 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280927835052 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180412371134 0.200843997647 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113402061856 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89289973938 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 219.290929204 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579896907216 0.48968727796 118% => OK
Word variations: 68.1476688919 55.4138127331 123% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 24.25 23.380412469 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8869764773 59.4972553346 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4375 141.124799967 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 23.380412469 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 52.3427835052 51.4728631049 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.46363636364 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924947754525 0.391690518653 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0943140604223 0.123202303941 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0582449327066 0.077325440228 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576462889111 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172968897174 0.149214159877 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461104748199 0.161403998019 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045655509215 0.0892212321368 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245167381869 0.385218514788 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0827224574197 0.0692045440612 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524703650202 0.275328986314 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406063833464 0.0653680567796 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 10.0 3.66592920354 273% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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