Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The author of the issue asserts that scandals are the best way due to the fact that they concentrate our attention on frivolous problems than any others people could do. Due to the controversial nature of this question there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that scandals are the part of every given society and penetrated every single facet of our lives day in day out. In the ensuing paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to collaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, scandals involve immoral, shocking and illegal behavior of people which is not approved of in the society. Because of their immoral nature they raise different feeling and attitude or even reactions among people. Scandals is a kind of disorder generated in the society that becomes a concern for a large section of a society. Broadly speaking, when problem takes shape of a scandal, there are vast majorities of people involved and affected by it. The feelings and sentiments of people are influenced and finding a solution becomes all the more difficult. To elucidate more on the issue, it will be able to disrupt the law and order of a place and in this case, people will confront trials and tribulations and leaders may face serious difficulties to bring back the situation of peace and tranquility. As a tangible example, when US governors during nuclear negotiation imposed sanction on Iran, scandals and their consequences impact people life in a way that different feeling, anxiety and reactions spared out quickly and disrupt people lives.
Another reason that cannot go unnoticed is that although scandals might seems as the best solution especially for politicians in order to remain in power, it may put trustworthy into danger. To put it in general word, by and large, it is established beyond doubt that every society in all around the globe need integrity and consistency in order to flourish day in day out. But scandals or even lies spread out by reformers in the society may damage trustworthy among people because it’s the utmost important hallmark, which people looking for. Going into the depth, scandals will force people pay attention to frivolous matters and in this case, can not only people trust each other but also cannot stay focused on significant problems. For instance, many hypocritical presidents prefer to save their position by scandals and lies in the society and conceal the fact from people. As far as I am concerned, they just reduce the trustworthy and integrity among people.
However what was alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Somehow leaders in the society face difficult situation which my put the society in critical circumstance. Indeed, when authorities are not able to come up with the best idea in order to return situation into previous shape, scandals will provide an opportunity for them to bring back peace and tranquility.
In light of the reasons elaborated, I reiterated that scandals are inseparable part of every particular society. In fact, scandals will put a society into critical situation and are able to distracted people lives. In addition, lies or scandals will come up with serious problems such as lose of trustworthy or even integrity and so forth. If people concentrate on unimportant issues by scandals, hardly can people flourish in their daily life and we will soon witness a lagging society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'in general', 'kind of', 'such as', 'by and large', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261146496815 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.138535031847 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0764331210191 0.0880659088768 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445859872611 0.0497285424764 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0350318471338 0.0444667217837 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136942675159 0.12292977631 111% => OK
Participles: 0.031847133758 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75441709552 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0302547770701 0.030933414821 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0111464968153 0.0016655270985 669% => OK
Determiners: 0.0875796178344 0.0997080785238 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286624203822 0.0249443105267 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015923566879 0.0148568991511 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3471.0 2732.02544248 127% => OK
No of words: 572.0 452.878318584 126% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06818181818 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.58838876751 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.386363636364 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302447552448 0.280924506359 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208041958042 0.200843997647 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124125874126 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75441709552 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 219.290929204 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.615875699 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8333333333 23.380412469 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0915000292 59.4972553346 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.625 141.124799967 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 23.380412469 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 54.0780885781 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.97080291971 1.64882698954 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355112823006 0.391690518653 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0963819556223 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0603122833628 0.077325440228 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534185698138 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102474715989 0.149214159877 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142128804436 0.161403998019 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538785326118 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395662942615 0.385218514788 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0724016088064 0.0692045440612 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255491300518 0.275328986314 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296919072581 0.0653680567796 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.30420353982 283% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 13.0 3.66592920354 355% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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