Students are more interested in politics now rather than past. Do you agree or disagree?
The 20th and 21th centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes which have been made in human's life. Perhaps the most important milestone of these two centuries is the changes that they have made in human taste in different realm such as politic, economic and so forth. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether nowadays, students show great interest in entering politics or in the past. However, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, students in the past were more involved in politics. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today's hectic world, life has become more perplexed and intricate and students have engaged in their life and education. Scientifically speaking, because of globalization world is becoming more competitive and hardly ever students think about politics. In fact, today's students confront different trials and tribulations in their lives especially in their education due to the fact that they have to spend more time on their study in order to reach higher education. Delving further into the issue reveal that vast majorities of students care about their personal life and bend over backwards to be successful in future and their careers. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that a plethora of students prefer to follow their interest in other territory such as engineering and not to say anything about politics thank to paucity of knowledge about politics. Indeed, politic is of the least interest among students.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that nowadays, crowds of students care about fashion and like to have fun. Broadly speaking, in the past students took the politics matters more serious rather than today's students owing to the fact that there is a correlation between politics and their destiny. To put it in other word, in today's hectic cities, many students like to show off in the public and make peer relationship. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, nowadays students are showing their great concerns to the country's future and want to give a hand to crackdown corruption. They went out and delivered speeches against local government in order to try to save their country.
To wrap it up, students in the past have been more interested in politics. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that nowadays students like to focus on their personal life especially their education and do not involve in politics. Additionally, today's students like to follow fashion and have fun. Indeed, they are not curious towards politics matters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e not curious towards politics matters.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237721021611 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.155206286837 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104125736739 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0628683693517 0.046263068375 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0451866404715 0.0685040099705 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133595284872 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.049115913556 0.0351676179071 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83359870546 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0451866404715 0.0309702414327 146% => OK
Particles: 0.00589390962672 0.00188951952338 312% => OK
Determiners: 0.0648330058939 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00392927308448 0.0209618222197 19% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00785854616896 0.0139019557991 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2913.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 467.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23768736617 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385438972163 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316916488223 0.251872472559 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.248394004283 0.174417080927 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13704496788 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83359870546 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507494646681 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.7162761862 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2380952381 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4177070049 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.714285714 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2380952381 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.644075263715 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 53.9297440604 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.59701492537 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219065260338 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114039953387 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0566644161715 0.0752933317313 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537354462756 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129519118322 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975927101918 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731357768531 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.535491090699 0.336927656856 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0674411413015 0.067059652881 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175764807248 0.210909579961 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389020765366 0.0618886996521 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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