Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
We have reached many milestones in this era of research and development. Usually every problem statement that we tackle, in one way or the other wants to ease the life of human beings through their hardships. Like the use of science and technology for reducing human efforts while travelling, thus we got trains and aeroplanes. Other example includes teh World Wide Web - internet for better fast communication and smart phones to replace contact diaries, calendars and a big hefty impotable telephones.
So it can be seen that over the years technology has reduced a lot of problems in our society, but qouting 'problems' specifically, the affect of this word is immortal. Even though our problems are reduced to a larger extent, as humans, its our instinct to never get satisfied with anything we have. We always desire for more. The human mind always asks for perfection, making us believe that we still have problems and a lot more work is done. Like for example we invented the smartphones, by rigorous use of science and technology, giving the humans the power to control things using thier finger tips. Yet we see the launchs of more sohphisticated and much more powerful smartphones from a large variety of smartphone congloromates. This is because the first invention was a crude form. Ecen though it had given more power to each user but it lacked a lot of things - lacked perfection. So every year a vast number of engineerns and technologists work hard to remove the short comings of the previous versions of thier smartphones, trying to overcome all possibe problems, and presenting it to the public. Now the public always gets facinated by the new technology and its incomparable features to any other device on the planet. But after few says oif using it, the human brain tries to look for the loop holes in it. It may be slight unnoticable changes and would not effect on a large scale. But still it can be 'improved' - not the perfect one. It may the size or the texture with respect to the hand or the placement of cameras or the absence of headphone jack. It may be anything but not perfect. So the engineers get back to work and try to overcome the problems
In conlcusion, science and technology has surely played a very important role in obfiscating problems and givng better lives to humans but it can't solve 'all' the problems. Becuase its the human nature to look and desire for more and never fulfil its desire. Even when we would overcome allthe problems at present, we will have another set of it wating for the technologists and problem solvers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
.... So it can be seen that over the years technology has reduced a lot of problem...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... reduced to a larger extent, as humans, its our instinct to never get satisfied wit...
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Line 5, column 1372, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...light unnoticable changes and would not effect on a large scale. But still it can be i...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...and givng better lives to humans but it cant solve all the problems. Becuase its the...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...and givng better lives to humans but it cant solve all the problems. Becuase its the...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...it cant solve all the problems. Becuase its the human nature to look and desire for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77578475336 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67758074456 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544843049327 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8616992364 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8181818182 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59090909091 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125978915244 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375191870938 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466926038623 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096687569201 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024183767085 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.