Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Through the advance in science and technology, many problems of society have been solved. Some have not been completely solved yet, such as the cure of cancer. Others as communication and transportation are in constantly evolution. However, there are some problems that require human's decision and should not count on science and technology to be answered.
Everyday judges make decisions that impact the whole life of a person such as arrest warrants and death orders in countries which allow death penalties. No machine is able to make this decision, because there are very variables and the fact's interpretation lead to different conclusions. That is why in many countries judges count on juries’ votes to analyze each case.
In addition to morality matters, health issues are improbable to be fully performed by machines. It is true that nowadays surgeons perform minimally invasive surgeries guided by robots, nevertheless it is very common to surge a complication such as internal bleeding that requires the doctor to open the patient. Or it could be the case to interrupt the procedure and try again later, in the occasion the vital signals are decreasing. In other words, the circumstances change every minute, there is no rule in the matter of human body's reactions, and for this reason, it is up to a professional to look at every nuance and determine the next steps.
On the other hand, one could argue that when machines and robots work, the risk of human failure is zero. Yet this is true, it should be taken into account that robots are not risk free, as mentioned in the above paragraph, there is the risk to not stop or change the approach, when necessary, especially in human body surgeries. In summary, the risk of human failure and robot's wrong choice is mitigated when they are working together, instead of only one of them.
In conclusion, science and technology will not solve all the society's problems, rather they are going to keep helping, optimizing the results, and mitigating the risks collaboratively with the decisions makers - the humans. In other words, a machine may work better than a person, however a person and a machine together work better than any machine.
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- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether you agree or disagree Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position c 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'facts'' or 'fact's'?
Suggestion: facts'; fact's
...ecause there are very variables and the facts interpretation lead to different conclu...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with the decisions makers - the humans. In other words, a machine may work better ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, in addition, in conclusion, in summary, such as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02179836512 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74977309384 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558583106267 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6369864615 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1875 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116101441923 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375305760363 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395476401475 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604536793944 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307854878764 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.