The statement given brings forward two distinct components, where Science said to meaningless less without Religion. This sentence says that great understanding and innovations made my humans is of no importance without drawing its details to Religion. However, When we come out of the house in the morning, the sun that brightly appears, has evidence of how it emits light and rotates after 12 hours approximately. A religion will say different things that obey the conventions of a religion. It gives a theory about the above example by assumption which have no proof while, the world today runs on evidence.
Science has made humans life better and gave answers to many things in and outside the planet. For example, In the ancient times humans use to live an austere life, trying to survive by food and prayed to different gods. They believed that rain is a gift from god and didn’t know when and why it would rain. But, after hundreds of years the questioning power of humans increased and great Scientists evolved. The humans studied different aspects of nature and gave answers to many qualms. It was proved that vapors from the earth surface evaporates and forms clouds, resulting in rain.
Best example would be the diseases that science has helped to cure and inevitably outperforming religion. Many people use to die in the earlier days due to sickness caused by different factors and sat back praying to god. Science in medical field has helped to study human body and recognize different diseases in human body. The technology and innovations have slowly evolved and medicines were produced by conducting different experiments. Diseases like cancer have cure today because of science. This is a field where religion cannot help the human while, science does wonders.
The life we lead today is because of science and this wouldn’t have been possible if human stood by their religion believes. Scientists like Newton have studied about the gravity and proved how an object is pulled on to the ground. Additionally Scientists evidence of how the earth is formed and the lack of gravity in the space was proved. In the present world, Science has solved many problems that a religion cannot explain. The things that science taught us helped humans move forward and made us use our brain in an efficient manner and learn new things.
As mentioned above science is different from religion and helps humans to understand the relation of things that happen in the galaxy rather than an assumption. Science is a developing field since hundreds of years and will keep moving forward. Science doesn’t end with a single concept as there so many things that science has answered and will discover in future. Thus religion doesn’t describe science or give it a better meaning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...or example, In the ancient times humans use to live an austere life, trying to surv...
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Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and forms clouds, resulting in rain. Best example would be the diseases that ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...d forms clouds, resulting in rain. Best example would be the diseases that scie...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...bly outperforming religion. Many people use to die in the earlier days due to sickn...
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Line 9, column 233, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...w an object is pulled on to the ground. Additionally Scientists evidence of how the earth is...
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Line 9, column 516, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... move forward and made us use our brain in an efficient manner and learn new things. As mentioned a...
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Line 11, column 356, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... science has answered and will discover in future. Thus religion doesn’t describe science...
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Line 11, column 367, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s answered and will discover in future. Thus religion doesn’t describe science or gi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261904761905 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.196428571429 0.157235817809 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0734126984127 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.031746031746 0.0497285424764 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0277777777778 0.0444667217837 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117063492063 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0535714285714 0.0406280797675 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53906465982 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277777777778 0.030933414821 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0892857142857 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138888888889 0.0249443105267 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.031746031746 0.0148568991511 214% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2801.0 2732.02544248 103% => OK
No of words: 465.0 452.878318584 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02365591398 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382795698925 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283870967742 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176344086022 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0989247311828 0.132149295362 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53906465982 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511827956989 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 59.3430712204 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8846153846 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0557957249 59.4972553346 42% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.730769231 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8846153846 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.269230769231 0.674092028746 40% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 46.2717121588 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.68992248062 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325048365778 0.391690518653 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0958384778979 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0719590452516 0.077325440228 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489965153574 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.093165387761 0.149214159877 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123919389909 0.161403998019 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408754917213 0.0892212321368 46% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.39226230343 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0245323474784 0.0692045440612 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231245069929 0.275328986314 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204936206135 0.0653680567796 31% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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