scientist and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
This topic raises the conventional issue that the scientist and other researchers would continue their research in the field from which the people are beneficial for. as there are many fields on which we can do the research work, and there is wast number of area on which the research is presently conducted but there are many such fields on which the research is conducted but the result is not according to what as expected and do to which many resource get wanted. so i agree with the author that research must be conducted in the right direction and for the public wellfare.
There were many fields on which the research is conducted which may result in the beneficial for the humans in the future. for example there is certain number of dieses which makes a humangous effect on the life of the patents, and to overcome such kind od dieses researchers should conduct the research on the dieses and how to overcome this which may result in the beneficial to tham and for the peoples which may get infected by them in the future.
The research may be conducted in a field like space which get beneficial for generating the ways by which the further form of communication between the people get generated and in the space research we can also analise some kind of beneficial information from the solar system which can be help full to the world. and do to space exploration missions we can find the information for the surrounding planets which may get helpful for further research in the future.
There are large number of areas on which research can be conducted and resulting to the beneficial of the mankind such as research in the field of transportation for an example the research is conducted by the spacex company on the transportation through the inter planatery space craft by which a long gurney of 14-20 hours get reduced to the 45 minutes. similarly the research in the field of medical is conducted for making the sensitive skin for the humans which is beneficial for those who are disable and wanted to fill the sense in their artificial organs.
There are certain research which is initialy does not resulting to any kind of benefits but at the end may get beneficial for he mankind.and as a result to preserve the resources the researchers should only conduct the research on the one which get beneficial for the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, well, for example, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73722627737 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59837155563 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.377128953771 0.4932671777 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.5125133909 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.7 118.986275619 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.1 23.4991977007 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240438883556 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130397780772 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622518673082 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167324584255 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563774613101 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 14.1392134831 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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