Thanks to the rapid development of scientific technology, we are living in a better life than any of our ancestors. It is true the scicence has benefits most of people in every area in life. While I do not agree that the scientist should merely focus on the areas to contribute the human beings. There are so many area unkonwn for us to explore where we could not predict whether they could benefit the people all over the world.
To begin with, let's get into the outerspace. If we do not exploring the cosmic out of the Earth,the first trouble is that we will inevitably confront the population crisis in the future according to the populaion increasing presently.By the means of exploring the Moon and Mars, the scientist made the initial effort to immigrate to the other planets ,which could solve the population bombing issue. While it would be unblievable for our predecessor to imagine we could step into the Mars , they merely looked at the stars and wondered how it shined for you. Thus the future is beyond our imagination, do not conceive the area you may take as unnecessary.
What's more, even I do not want to address this coincidence, it is true that the War,which killed people, evoled the civilization by the means of new invetions as the byproduct of weapons. Tractors which are essential for agriculture, were came from the tanks in War I, the significant invetions created by scientists. We do not want to see the deaths of War, hence there are new areas which could evolve the whole nations' creavity like the reaseaching of Space craft. At first it was used to explore the outerspace like the voyage of Mars, now there are thousands kinds of vegetables which comes from the seeds travalling the space under the cosimic rays which can make the vegetables or fruits more healthy and nutrious. This important discovery was also found by scientits accidentally at the researching of outerspace.
Finally, there are other important areas which not useful to most of people can change the fate of human beings.Alan Touring, the father of computer, contributes the foudation of quandrum mechanics, was not comprehend by his peers when he wanted to persuade the Prime Minister of British to fund him, in order to make the ponderous machine which can decode the Enigma, the German crypt maker in WAR II. At the end , the Allies were benifited from his great invention which decoded various number of the enemies' letter, hence the situation of the WAR II changed, by this famous methametic, whose theory was esoteric to almost every one at that time.
In conclusion, I would not like to downplay the importance of scientists' contributions on the dailiy life, while we should not ignore their endeavor on the area where could not benefit most of people, that is the place where our human being may head with, the remember we are living in this lonely planet thus we need know more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...s. It is true the scicence has benefits most of people in every area in life. While I do not a...
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Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s most of people in every area in life. While I do not agree that the scientist shoul...
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Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun area seems to be countable; consider using: 'many areas'.
Suggestion: many areas
...ntribute the human beings. There are so many area unkonwn for us to explore where we coul...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ot exploring the cosmic out of the Earth,the first trouble is that we will inevitabl...
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Suggestion: By
...g to the populaion increasing presently.By the means of exploring the Moon and Mar...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...effort to immigrate to the other planets ,which could solve the population bombing...
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Suggestion: ,
...r to imagine we could step into the Mars , they merely looked at the stars and won...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ars and wondered how it shined for you. Thus the future is beyond our imagination, d...
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Suggestion: What's
...he area you may take as unnecessary. Whats more, even I do not want to address thi...
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Suggestion: , which
...his coincidence, it is true that the War,which killed people, evoled the civilization ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...ich are essential for agriculture, were came from the tanks in War I, the significan...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...her important areas which not useful to most of people can change the fate of human beings.Ala...
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Suggestion: Alan
...ple can change the fate of human beings.Alan Touring, the father of computer, contri...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'comprehended'.
Suggestion: comprehended
...oudation of quandrum mechanics, was not comprehend by his peers when he wanted to persuade...
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Suggestion:
...his peers when he wanted to persuade the Prime Minister of British to fund him, i...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...German crypt maker in WAR II. At the end , the Allies were benifited from his grea...
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Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...vor on the area where could not benefit most of people, that is the place where our human bein...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that is the place where our human being may head with, the remember we are livin...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e where our human being may head with, the remember we are living in this lonely planet thu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, look, may, so, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 500.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.808 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61179309123 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.504226967 60.3974514979 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.25 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204634008679 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650627607717 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340566693934 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106735767307 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162408639046 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.