Society has to provide a magnificent support for the development of the new generation since the future of the society depends on them. I agree with the recommendation that children who have special talents should receive intensive support and training at an early age to develop their talent.
Talent is the catalyst of the success, which cannot be achieved without continuous training and hard work. Society should recognize the talented children in their early stage and provide all the support and guidance for them to nurture their talents. In other words, talent is a gift of God, it comes in early age and demands an exceptional care to flourish. For instance, Lionel Messi, prominent soccer player, he started playing at an early age and developed outstanding performance, now he is one of the most talented and successful soccer players in the world. This phenomenal achievement wouldn't exist without early training and hard working to develop his exceptional skills. Other examples could be found in many famous soccer clubs since they all have youth teams, enable to nurture the promising talents of some children who would be successful team players in the future.
Furthermore, the flourish of the talents can have immense effects on the society. Many societies are discerned by their figures and idols. For instance, Paris is known as the city of The art and fashion, which make the city a hub for people from different part of the world who would love to explore the magic of art. Thus, it is important for any society to promote the talents in early ages since the success of these talents can be beneficial for the society whom they belong to.
While training in early ages might be stressful and overwhelming for the children and their families, it is crucial for the development of their talent and for making them more resistant to the pressure of the life of the talents. Furthermore, many talents demand early training in order to be developed. Such as gymnastics, kids start practicing gymnastics as early as three years old, it more efficient and practical to start at early ages.
In conclusion, talents require intensive support and guidance from the society to be successful. When supporting the talent development at early ages, society assures that the talented children received all the infrastructure they needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07474226804 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68182333007 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1278170709 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.823529412 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377500173031 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135114425197 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979846577389 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244053284424 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969399327686 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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