Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
While some people argue that we can do everything we want if a lot of hard work is devoted to a certain activity, researchers focused on studying human behavior state that special talents in a given subject is innate. Therefore, unless we are born with a special ability, does not really matter how much time we spend to improve it. this topic is especially relevant for children since the more the society provide training for talented kids, the more the overall population will be benefit years later.
Firstly, the majority of well-developed countries in the past, if not all, concentrated their attention on giving opportunities to enhance children's development by a satisfactory educational system early in life. Meanwhile, the society was able to recognize those children with special talents, providing training for them to develop their abilities later in life. The government of those nations knew that this police would improve their competitiveness worldwide. For instance, South Korea become an international powerful nation in aerospacial as a result of a first opportunity given for students whose demonstrated exceptional capacities in Maths early in life.
In addition to concomitantly improve children's abilities in a given area and give to them chances to study, the society should stimulate their development in special talents because it can substantially change people's life. For example, several young kids in brazil have a dream to become a succesful soccer player since brazil is worldwide recognize by its talent and extremely good players. However, most famous players with an incredible talent used to live under poor conditions, mainly in favelas in Rio de Janeiro. By stimulating and providing training for them, the society had the chance to improve their lives and the overall life of their families.
In conclusion, the society should devote more attention to children with special talents since they can improve their native nations through their abilities later in life and because they can have their life's changed by their innate abilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 328.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36585365854 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86470527069 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576219512195 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0089497273 57.8364921388 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.666666667 119.503703932 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 23.324526521 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 5.70786347227 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3953048404 0.218282227539 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146912767484 0.0743258471296 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103082691154 0.0701772020484 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239149866439 0.128457276422 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737173259624 0.0628817314937 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.3799401198 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.3550499002 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.197005988 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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