Talent it is an standard for checking an some one knowledge, his thinking level. So it may vary a person to person, an school student to student. I Partially agree with given statement suggest that society should identify those children who have special talent and provide training them an training at early stage to develop their talent. Education is mandatory to everyone for being survival in the developed country's.
There are child who done slavery due to family financial condition, they are unable to bear an school fees, tuition fees. so that the left their education at early stage even though they have really talents. at this instant society may form an comity which further look such talented student help them to pursue further education.
Now days, the positiveness to wards this this fact, there are several example we seen on television. shows report of Mr. XYZ, have distributed an school book, writing book. apart from this young youth from rural area, those are regret to move towards city just reason behind they start an primary school, educate the student in free.
Second part of this is, now even though child have talent, there are always different way to explore there way. rather he independently, find out his own way, so that he made an strong impression in society. Let us take example, if some one have very nice voice in built, and he also very much interested in singing, there is no restriction him to perform and to shown his singing ability. so from this may be found his carrier path.
There are lot's of ways, rather i suggest you have yourself lots keys bunches, there are lots of door. you continuously try at some stage you got correct key for door. so you may drop down number of time, but at certain attempt you got success. this is an victory for you struggle at end you got.
So to sum up, with all one can't regret that even society has culture to help an poor child or who lagging in education. on other hand each and everyone has chance to show an inbuilt quality.
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...rform and to shown his singing ability. so from this may be found his carrier path...
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...path. There are lots of ways, rather i suggest you have yourself lots keys bun...
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...ome stage you got correct key for door. so you may drop down number of time, but a...
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...t that even society has culture to help an poor child or who lagging in education....
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... has chance to show an inbuilt quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, really, second, so, apart from, even so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69101123596 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29344944676 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7985866583 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332562619484 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931639965277 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110935395298 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156698063808 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118272254223 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.