Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Leadership is a necessary skill for a candidate aiming to secure a good position in government, industry, or other fields. Society is in a way responsible for the development of such skills in its young generation. As the prompt argues, the society should prepare its young people for leadership by instilling them a sense of cooperation than competition. Now, cooperation and competition are both effective ways to develop such skills. Were I to choose a side between them, I would incline slightly more towards the competition than cooperation.
Nevertheless, The harsh reality of modern market economies is their market are largely driven by competition. So, it is necessary to provide young people a sense of competition before they come to face them in actual life. While competition provides fuel to the necessity to constantly innovate and improvise, and perform each task in better way, the cooperation would bolster the spirit of sportsmaship and unity. Excessive competition leads to resurgement of selfishness among young people. So, much competition would rather do more harm than good.
The best way to impart necessary skills in the young generation would be through competition involving teams. In that way, While young people will learn cooperation among the team, they will also have the competition to fuel their desire to excel. They can learn certain aspects of leadership skills like team management while working as a team, they will also learn other aspects while competing with fellow teams.
Some total supporters of the argument may argue that the sense of competition will sow seeds of selfishness and other ignoble vices among the young generation. Though it might lead to such negative impressions, it is also necessary to learn to deal with real life situation like challenges than to work in totally idealistic environment.
To conclude, while both competition and cooperation have their advantages and disadvantages, having a mediocre mechanism involving both to prepare young people for forthcoming challenges would be a better way to instill leadership skills.
- Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 73
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.Write a response in which you 50
- The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words. 78
- "The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in 42
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting yo 33
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38972809668 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98115523488 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498489425982 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9765140452 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122004517873 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422847620984 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355761625236 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074566757393 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026855772783 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.