Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talent and interest when choosing a field of study Others believe that college students base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field

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Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talent and interest when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.

The most Important task of every student's life that choosing field of study. Future may depend on the selection of field of study. First statement may give proper guidance to student that choose field of study on basis of talent and interest. rather second statement some where lagging in accordance just because of job oppertunity you may select different field of study than your area of interest.

There are always two thing, if you interest and you are lagging in talent for required for field of study. If you fail due to lagging in conceptual and strong command on filed of study then it may shows poor academic performance. It may result in future job interviews. rather you know you weakness and your strong point then it's beneficial at time of choosing field of study.

Let's take example for rural people, who are illiterate if his son of literate from there family background. Then it may also fail if you are getting good suggestion or rather you are just blindly faith on people's suggestion. Then it may fails, according to student talent and interest and also capacity to hod for same it's major thing that every one must understood.

Rather there are situation a happen, if Family setting a culture for doing carrier in doctor. although one can meet family culture, due to his talent not because of interest. It gives him official degree of doctor rather area of interest may different, at some stage he realise that his of interest different but time may left long ago.

Considering into all this things, one can't neglect that your interest, talent, and capacity towards field of study. It must important for everyone to set goal of life, or to achieve something in life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
The most Important task of every students life that choosing field of study. Futu...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
... proper guidance to student that choose field of study on basis of talent and interes...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rather
... study on basis of talent and interest. rather second statement some where lagging in ...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: rather,
... study on basis of talent and interest. rather second statement some where lagging in ...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: SOME_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhere'?
Suggestion: somewhere
...t and interest. rather second statement some where lagging in accordance just because of j...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...ea of interest. There are always two thing, if you interest and you are lagging in...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'thing' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'things'.
Suggestion: things
...ea of interest. There are always two thing, if you interest and you are lagging in...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rather
...It may result in future job interviews. rather you know you weakness and your strong p...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: rather,
...It may result in future job interviews. rather you know you weakness and your strong p...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...then its beneficial at time of choosing field of study. Lets take example for rura...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... at time of choosing field of study. Lets take example for rural people, who are ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...hing that every one must understood. Rather there are situation a happen, if Family...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...ne must understood. Rather there are situation a happen, if Family setting a culture f...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...derstood. Rather there are situation a happen, if Family setting a culture for doing ...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
... a culture for doing carrier in doctor. although one can meet family culture, due to his...
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Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'realises'.
Suggestion: realises
...nterest may different, at some stage he realise that his of interest different but time...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... left long ago. Considering into all this things, one cant neglect that your inte...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... Considering into all this things, one cant neglect that your interest, talent, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81506849315 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4179828413 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2913978483 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.875 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207400273432 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812783407999 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734897367543 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123277813426 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905049881797 0.0667264976115 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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