Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Education is something that is mandatory for one to be successful in any field. While it is certain that people pursue higher studies in college only for getting a commendable job in future, choosing a field of study solely based on job opportunities is not appropriate.
In any job, success is determined not only on the basis of money, but also on degree of happiness and satisfaction, which is obtained by pursuing field of choice and interest. Take, for instance, a case where a student opts for law only because it assures a secure career in future. Once he/she becomes a lawyer, it might result in huge income but at the end of every day, the person will be disgruntled and disappointed because they do not like what they do. What, then, is the point of earning huge sums of money when a person is blasé with life?
Another point of cardinal importance here is that at the instant of choosing a field, jobs might be scarce in the field, but new opportunities can always open up in future. Moreover, if a person has a flair for his field of interest, he/she will succeed even if job opportunities are less. For example, the famous Indian cricketer Sachin Tendulkar chose cricket as a career because he was keenly interested in it, and he surely came up with flying colours. While it is true that every aspiring cricketer does not become Sachin Tendulkar, he/she at least is happy and satisfied with career.
When everyone pursues a certain field because of job opportunities, the field tends to get saturated. The increasing number of students opting for Computer Science is the best example in this situation. Eventually, there might be no jobs available for those who are really interested have the talent because all the positions are filled up with those who chose it only for money and security. This will also have a negative effect on the Nations development, as the policies, decisions and work may not be up to the mark. Sometimes, choosing a field based on job opportunities helps tackle unemployment to a certain extent. For example, a person trained in jewellery designing may have no job even if he/she has received high education in that field, because it is not in demand and thus not very successful. The person then starts to feel that they should have chosen a more secure option such as IT where there are ample opportunities available, and where more people are required. This however does not bring happiness in the person’s life.
To be successful in any field, struggle is required. Hence, it matters not which fields have ample opportunities, as long as one has the alacrity and zeal for life and is prepared for the tough competition he/she might face in future. As someone has rightly said, ”there are no ideal careers, only ideal choices”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...lege only for getting a commendable job in future, choosing a field of study solely based...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...only because it assures a secure career in future. Once he/she becomes a lawyer, it might...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ut new opportunities can always open up in future. Moreover, if a person has a flair for ...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...the tough competition he/she might face in future. As someone has rightly said, 'the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, thus, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82536382536 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74954922118 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.471040795 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.523809524 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9047619048 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227706232591 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762982771938 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682173122011 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145074975264 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589379409652 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.