some people believe that corporation have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much as money a possible.
Corporate plays a vital role in any countries economic system. It can also be said that 50 %of the country's population works in multi national and private limited companies. Their job is not only constrained on the company level but it also affects the nation's economy.
Firstly, when the demonitization took place in 2017 in India, its effects was quite noticeable and the economy was drastically fallen down. This indicates that corporation plays a major role in over all development and not only in supporting the nation financially. Significantly in the outcome of the downfall many companies faced major crisis and in result of this they had to lessen the number of employees which resulted to low employment rate in the country. Multinational company such as MTNL had to cut off the number of employees by 8000 in result of this those 8000 people are now jobless and may be seeking new job. Despite being qualified corporate employees have very less job security. When we talk about the economic crisis of the country it is also seen that no of automobile companies are shutting down their production because the number of buyers have drastically fallen down.
Secondly, Many corporate companies offer their employees the best amenities such as for the working women they have special day care section where the employee’s child could stay in there until the employee’s shit doesn’t ends. Additionally, companies also give gym and shopping centres for their employee. These amenities are provided just to make sure their employees doesn’t loose their essence of life in the hustle bustle of their work life. Though the country is facings some serious issues the companies are trying their best to make available all the requirements of employees.
Thirdly, there are number of companies and each plays a specific role in our society. Our nations development is interlined on the basis of all these kinds of job and the effects are seen in each one. Undoubtedly corporate provides money but that is not their only job to do. MNC’s represent our nation on international level in that case on money is not the crucial thing.
In conclusion of the statement above, corporate do makes money for the nation but that is not their only job but also to highlight their hard work and nations development.
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- "Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerne 26
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...e company level but it also affects the nations economy. Firstly, when the demoni...
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Line 5, column 775, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...sis of the country it is also seen that no of automobile companies are shutting do...
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Line 9, column 399, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... make sure their employees doesn't loose their essence of life in the hustle bus...
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Line 9, column 468, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n the hustle bustle of their work life. Though the country is facings some serious iss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08549222798 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7989203765 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515544041451 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7123073657 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.055555556 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104496736952 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037213434166 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316855672948 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594530630308 0.150359130593 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166552202934 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.