Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and
environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they
operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your
reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the
views presented
Any organized civilization relies on a healthy environnement where it can evolve and grow. In the today's free market driven economies it is difficult for most countries to strongly promote economic without on regard to the evironnemental counstraint and hold companies accountable for the domanages they might be causing the environnement. While some support a strong strong responsabilities from companies to contribute to protect the enivironnement, others share a more extreme capatalistic and rather favor companies' interest over the environnement.
It is true that for an economy to grow and provide opportunities for most people, it has to rely on successful companies that contribute strongly to the economic growth through employement, and the goods and services their offer to the economy. Thus, if companies are able to grow and expand their activities, they are able to hire more people, pay more taxes, and contribute even futher more to the prosperity of the economy. Companies can only be successful if they are profitable and then can afford to invest in research and development in order for to continue to increase their contribution to the economy. However, if companies activities are detrimental to the environnement they are operating in, this might be not be totally innocuous to the economic growth and people's prosperity.
Indeed, as a healthy environnement is more likely to provide more opportinities for companies and for everyone, companies cannot ignore the environnemental concerns pertaining to their activites. If the evironnement they are operating is not healthy, and does not enable people to grow and interact with the companies, the companies themselves will shut down and this will be domaging for everyone.
As science has established that the global warming the caused by the human activites, and that humanity only has few years to reverse course before it is too, late companies have to relize that everyone should be concern about the well-being of the environnement and make sure that their activites do not hinder the furtur's generation sustainabilities.
In summary, although companies need to be profitable in order for them to contribute to the economical prosperity, they also need to promote the well-being the environnement they oparate in because as science has proven that if we do not take action to protect the envionnement, we will be harming not only our current environnement we live in, but also preventing furture generation from having the opportonuty to live in a healthy envionnement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: strong
...the environnement. While some support a strong strong responsabilities from companies to cont...
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Line 13, column 214, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concerned'?
Suggestion: concerned
... have to relize that everyone should be concern about the well-being of the environneme...
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Line 17, column 93, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... in order for them to contribute to the economical prosperity, they also need to promote t...
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Line 17, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ect the envionnement, we will be harming not only our current environnement we li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, in summary, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38805970149 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24943803653 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485074626866 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.2312473655 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.909090909 118.986275619 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5454545455 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141431058069 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572288430584 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03648122109 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852933039316 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204888632045 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 14.1392134831 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 48.8420337079 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.