Corporations are generally the authorities or organizations that are assigned to perform jobs that make money. One portion of the prompt says that the corporations should try to provide an environment so that the society gets benefited. But the other portion expressed the feelings of some people that corporations should abide by the law and focus on more money generation. I mostly agree with the first part of the prompt though I do concede that focusing on generating more money within the appropriate law is one of the vital tasks of the corporations.
Firstly, the general people of the societies do have an expectation from the persons of corporations. They expect that the people working in a corporation will be dedicated to their work in such a way that they will always work in such a way that the societies will get a good environment and get benefited. For example, if the persons working for a corporation will be helped by the society people if they show their tendency to create a better environment. This shows that creating a nice environment and promoting the development of the society will surely meet the people’s expectations and help the persons to perform their job properly.
Secondly, the corporations are closely connected with the job they are assigned for and can provide easily a well natured environment related to their work. For instance, if they create such an environment that will promote the well being of society, they will also get benefited as the environment of their workplace would be better. This is why they should try to create an environment that will bring development to environment of the societies. This will create their working smooth and also, the corporations and the society- both will be benefited.
However, it is true that the ultimate task given to a corporation is to follow some specific rules and create as much money as possible within the legal procedure. But the corporations can surely make more money following the proper regulations, but they can create more benefit and beautiful environment if they focus on both- to provide good environment and generate more money. In fact, it is obvious that they will be able to create good environment if they follow the rules and regulations properly because in general, the rules and regulations of a corporation is designed for the well fare of the country and the society as well.
To conclude, it can be said that the corporations can provide nice environment to the society as it will help them in their working environment and also, it will keep the society people satisfied although, the ultimate task of the corporations is to generate more money following the proper law. But it is actually possible for the corporations to generate money to target amount and also, providing or improving the environment of the societies.
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...d the society- both will be benefited. However, it is true that the ultimate ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, in general, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2374.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97693920335 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89945974571 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.364779874214 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2008365416 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.647058824 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0588235294 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310772084454 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12867662606 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436580602685 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202510146346 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193340682936 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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