I agree the statement that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the society and environment in which they operate. For any corporation to work and operate efficiently it is important to ensure they have a settled and well maintained environment.It is true that the only objective of any corporation is to operate within the laws and make as much money as possible but as a responsible resident and a big organization it is their responsibility to also ensure they well being of that place.
If every corporation looks and cares about its environment and society it may lead to a wholesome development of the entire town or city. In many countries there are various cleanliness drives and functional events that are being conducted in regular intervals in many organizations. This not only ensures the well being of the environment but also encourage its residents to be a part of it in protecting and maintaining their environment. When an organization does not bother about the well being of the society and its environment it might not perform well as compared to other organization which look after its environment.The mindset of the employees remain blocked when they work in such rigid environment which is only revenue-concerned. Organizations which conduct such social work are well recognized outside for its versatility in its work culture and impact on its environment. This also adds value in their employees and teaches them the significance of looking after their environment.
Although it might not affect some corporations which are not so much concerned about its environment and society, they would lack the energy and enthusiasm among their employees or workforce in doing any work that would require them to contribute to their environment in some way. Thus i feel that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the society and environment in which they operate.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'i feel', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205521472393 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.180981595092 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0766871165644 0.0880659088768 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.058282208589 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0889570552147 0.0444667217837 200% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116564417178 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0490797546012 0.0406280797675 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.22892258239 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0337423312883 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0981595092025 0.0997080785238 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153374233129 0.0249443105267 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0306748466258 0.0148568991511 206% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1940.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 315.0 452.878318584 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15873015873 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304761904762 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263492063492 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196825396825 0.200843997647 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174603174603 0.132149295362 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22892258239 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 219.290929204 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.6206556711 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 31.5 23.380412469 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.7352292901 59.4972553346 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.0 141.124799967 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 23.380412469 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 57.8492063492 51.4728631049 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.1308411215 1.64882698954 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513238606685 0.391690518653 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.174344883832 0.123202303941 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106466984554 0.077325440228 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630993887709 0.547984918172 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181740352266 0.149214159877 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.291020354749 0.161403998019 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204487672249 0.0892212321368 229% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.506849497958 0.385218514788 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0407612705682 0.0692045440612 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.446110599011 0.275328986314 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119888826751 0.0653680567796 183% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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