Ofcourse ,corporations are inevitable in today's world and they rise in abnormal manner ,they are major source of development of any country.With the advent of corporate,the number of employment has been increased significantly and life of many people got brighten up.
With increase in corporation ,there is increase in development if economic growth of country,infrastructure has been developed well,the life of people is simplified.Many incredible things which were only confined to hands of few people are now brought into hands of common man.The huge money involved in doing research.Many researched product are coming to the people with low cost and user friendly because of the corporate which play behind it.
For example,many people are working on many concepts to promote the well being for human.Safety,system,suspension,power train are different different parts in which scientist are working. Corporates being the major player in promoting welfare of human ,integrating all these components and give a complete product to the end customer.Ofcouse they are making money ,out of the products they sold without getting the comprise with the materials they used for manufacturing.If their only aim is to make money they could have used low quality materials in order to see more profit.But they didnt do that.
On other hand ,few companies who majorly eyed on profit was PepsiCo and CoCo-Cola.They were the dominant players in beverage industries.people believed them and consumed their products.After few years ,it was come to know that these companies add pesticide to their product which indirectly affected the health of lot of people.Eventhough these products were banned initially ,they used loopholes in law and again they come back and continuing their position with reduced quantity of chemicals as suggested by law.
Many corporates today have their Social responsibility problem in which tree plantation,child education,Beach cleaning activity are the mandatory part of their work culture.By inducing these ,it promotes the responsblity of an individual as citizen.
Thus we cannot completely say corporates are purely money minded.The money they are making should promote not only promote themselves,it should society
- The following appeared in a health magazine published in Corpora."Medical experts say that only one-quarter of Corpora's citizens meet the current standards for adequate physical fitness, even though twenty years ago, one-half of a 23
- Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at 50
- Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws 50
- Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws 50
- "Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make a 50
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but, if, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71301775148 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6901699262 2.79657885939 132% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.083266909 60.3974514979 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 275.857142857 118.986275619 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.2857142857 23.4991977007 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 7.80617977528 576% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290517112974 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129014785131 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373317052223 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138264026438 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417343733652 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 14.1392134831 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 48.8420337079 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 12.1743820225 200% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.1639044944 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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