Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
The topic at hand suggests the beliefs of people on the functions of corporations in the society. Certain factions think that the corporations should have responsibilty towards society and environment while others believe that if the corporations are working within the laws, they are supposed to look after their financial interests only. While There is no clear answer to the issue at hand, both the claims have pro's and con's.
Firstly the corporations are formed so that the people who are associated with it earn money. Hence the claim that: provided the corporations operate within the tenets, they have fiduciary duty towards the people associated with them, to help them earn profit and thus make as much money as possible. But it is also possible that the corporation while earning money, can promote the well-being of the people in need.
Furthermore there is also a moral obligation towards making the environment and the society in which you live more habitable and problem-free. The employees working in the corporations are an important part of these corporations; these employees are also a part of the society, and may appreciate if their living standards are improved.
Moreover, nowadays it is seen that the consumers tend to deal with corporations that are more humane. Acoording to this it may even be beneficial financially for the corporations to take part in social and environment issues and help solving some issues.
In conclusion it is important that the corporations after completing their primary role of making money, contribute towards the well-being of the people in the world and the environment as a whole. In doing so they will also be able to form a positive image of themselves in the eyes of their consumers.
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- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... who are associated with it earn money. Hence the claim that: provided the corporatio...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...well-being of the people in need. Furthermore there is also a moral obligation toward...
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Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
... social and environment issues and help solving some issues. In conclusion it is im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 288.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11805555556 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87670205924 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5698087356 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.21951772744 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296730457008 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100060363617 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600545775561 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146915070686 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483701283807 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.