Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts
As we know that there are various type of arts exist in this world, and those arts depicts the culture and tradition of that country. If we look different of this world, people give respect to the artist whether he belongs to an race, cast and nationality. But only few governments support these artists and their work. In some countries these arts are bread and butter for artist, while in other region, people take it as a hobby.
Whether governments should support these artist or not? it becomes a heating debate by the passage of time. Some people think that government should stay away from this industry because an art doesn’t need any funding. In the past, we have hundreds of example where an art doesn’t lose it existence; it is in the same form as exist in the past. They think that artist doesn’t need any funding, he only need admirer and followers who appreciate his works. A dancer needs only followers, who are enough for his inspiration. We have some example of artist like Leonardo Di Vinci, one of the famous painter in history, he don’t receive any funding form government, now he inspires other painters.
Although It is true that artist needs money to spend his life. If we look in the developing countries, where people are not living a luxurious life, even in those countries we can found some beautiful art works. Those governments should take responsibility to help these artists, so they continue their work instead of living their professions. Government also takes part in order to help the existence of particular art which is at the end of its existence.
To sum up we can say that artist need inspiration to continue his work, he wants admirer who supports him. Moreover where governments think that a particular art is at the edge of existence, government should take initiative to flourish that art.
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- Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ect to the artist whether he belongs to an race, cast and nationality. But only fe...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this artist' or 'these artists'?
Suggestion: this artist; these artists
.... Whether governments should support these artist or not? it becomes a heating debate by ...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nts should support these artist or not? it becomes a heating debate by the passage...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent, now he inspires other painters. Although It is true that artist needs money to s...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ork, he wants admirer who supports him. Moreover where governments think that a particul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86477987421 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66043868969 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522012578616 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2368162295 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254194507397 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890967130772 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873772779151 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184335848267 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373779650291 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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