The given prompt talks about contrary in opinion on whether to consider a challenging situation as an opportunity to personal growth or not. This is a sensitive topic based on state and his personal passion in the situation the individual is involved in.
For a passionate being who is working on something he really loves, shifting his concentration towards the growth prospects tend to be a hindrance to the very work he loves. He would do a better job, by enjoying the process of solving this complex challenge immersing himself into it. Consider a student, really passionate about mathematics, sees a complex algebra problem in his exam. Now he starts thinking about this problem as an opportunity to be at the highest percentile in class rather than investing his time solving it he might eventually fail.
So any amount of time he spends on thinking about what all personal growth he might accomplish with this tend to be a wastage.
On the other hand, consider a situation were somebody is involved in a work that he doesn't like at all. Somebody who is stuck in a boring lower level job, might want to get into a more cheerful well paying higher level job. The only motivation that can drive him to do his current boring work is an opportunity that he posses to get out of it. In situations like this, thinking about the opportunity for personal growth certainly helps.
in another instance , were group work is involved in a complex challenge, If an individual starts thinking about his or her personal growth, he might focus only on getting individual recognition. for instance he might focus on trying to do important part of the work to get better recognition even though team has a better person to do it. Such cases it's hindrance to think of individual growth.
In conclusion, considering a challenge as an opportunity for personal growth tend to be both boon and bane depending on individual circumstances.
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- In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town we should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area The Hillview landfill which has been undeveloped for decades is a perfect site for the plant The b 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87575757576 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82372147077 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1803062206 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.266666667 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150889156953 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676103537266 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059681298655 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10230013008 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591187211308 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.