Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed
political leaders get the access to various confidential and important information related to the economic, political, social and cultural aspects related to a nation. they use those information to make clear decisions and to come up with strategies to improve the situations with the prevailing conditions and possible improvements to the things what they have predicted with the analysis of information. In my opinion, public has the right to get fully informed based on how sensible or relevant that information to them. some information are better to be kept in secret because they will create restless situations within the country.
Firstly, it is a right for each and every human to be aware of what is happening in his or her country. it is because they are the tax payers to the government to make the economic developments in the country. So it is important for them to know how their money is used effectively to bring the benefits that they promised during political leader’s regime as they promised. In Watergate scandal which happened in Washington in 1970s, people were confused and rebelled against the president Robert as they got to know that the president was aware of these political advantages that the people around him got corrupting the economic and financial procedures followed and he tried to cover those information from the general public. those rebellions were organized because people have the right to know information related to the financial and economic stability and whether ethical policies are followed as they are investing their money, time, effort for the well being of the nation. Furthermore, it is important for all the citizens to know what is happening around them. Otherwise the political leaders will get the advantage of people not knowing about them and will go more with their personal agendas more than national agendas not with their personal resources but with the national resources which are not their wealth but the wealth of each and every person living on this land.
however, there are some instances where not all the information can be expressed to the public as that creates a political or social insecurity for all of them. these situations generally associates with the aspects like national security. In second world war, if all the Japanese people were aware about their codes used by the military to communicate, those sensitive information would have been carried to the enemy or the rival parties where they would act accordingly and the nation would be in a trouble. In decades of war continued in Sri Lanka, political leaders got very impressive decisions in the process of ending the war. however, it was not wise to let people know the strategies that they followed and how they got secret information through different agencies. Considering this kinds of situations, it will be imprudent to make the people fully aware of the situation.
In conclusion, there should be a limit to the extent of information that the general public should be fully aware of. Yes they have the right to get to know them ,but at the same time the political leaders have the responsibility to ensure the well being of them making them away from violence and letting them to lead a normal life without forwarding much stress on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2752.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 548.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02189781022 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71586310567 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434306569343 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 882.9 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4359658259 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.842105263 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8421052632 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255992548906 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930695502322 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688162471567 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181225395654 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222079323903 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.