Political leaders are likely to have moral values and principles to address the problem of the public citizens. According to the prompt, a group of people argue that influential political leaders should focus on public interest, while others say that leaders should remain part prinicles dogged in .I mostly agree with the previous statement due to the following two reasons. However, I do concede that without principles and objectives, politics will become more adulted.
First of all, political leaders should be agile to make a political career much safer. For instance, many leaders, who are much more popular in the World, are becoming effective not due to the doctrine of the political ideology but effectively compromising for the public needs and interests. In addition, to make the political career much safer, nowadays political unions also become nimble in citizens' needs. If the leaders tried to ignore the country's citizens' opinions, they will face greater losses during the election. Citizens are a major concern in order to become effective political leaders.
Moreover, flexibility during the decision-making process helps to address the major problems of the citizens. For example, Mahatma Gandhi, a prominent leader of India, compromises his ideology and sign a peace treaty with British Empire. In addition, many effective leaders in the World compromise their ideology and principles when there is a major concern with the country's citizens. If they have become intransigent in their political agenda, there has been a great loss for the public. However, leaders shouldn't be ambitionless
and aimless which will create major repercussions in politics. Leaders without any ideology will move a country's politics to the dark side. Major disputes and major conflicts within the countries are due to a lack of objectivity and ideology.
To conclude, the flexibility to abandon principles is necessary to address the problems of the country's citizens as it is the prime factor for the future of political leaders as well as to address the public interest. At the same time, the lack of objectives will create a major dispute in the country as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7619188542 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501449275362 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1918164957 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.647058824 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274962762987 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944321237238 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060699110959 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15434919454 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656622998303 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.