Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Political leader are those who leads the society,they must have well defined principles and objective to lead the society , their objective should be based on the well fare of the people , if the leader compromise on the belief based on the public opinion, these will lead to confusion , However, if the leader is consistently committed to particular aim ,these principle's can do better well fare of the people.
First of all, political leader who follows the principles consistently are considered to be credible ,they are deemed as heroes by the public who in many ways try to emulate their behavior, Mahatma Gandhi one of the greatest leader of India , he consistently committed to particular principle's of non violence even after his death many people mimic his behavior as a super hero of India who fought for his country's freedom. leaders are always remembered by their work such as Hitler who promoted Nazism is regarded as the great leader because of his consistent work and success , the prime minister of India is regarded as the "best economist politician" thus each and every leader is identified by their unique opinion and the principle's they are adhere to.
Secondly, if particular principle is not help full to people it should change according to well fare of people , for example , in India child labor is defined as the children whose age is below 14 year, but now , the trend has changed everyone needs to have education at least until 16 to 18 year of age. hence, the political leader should take proper decision which will be beneficial to the citizens.
Finally, an effective leader is the one who is consistent to his principle's and aim; it creates the clear image of the politician and engenders trust on him in the minds of the people.
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- Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently 50
- Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7116493597 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 23.0359550562 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.222953214 60.3974514979 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 245.833333333 118.986275619 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.0 23.4991977007 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.8333333333 5.21951772744 380% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249361160184 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128885951736 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393047887321 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151759675482 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324001758028 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 14.1392134831 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 48.8420337079 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.2143820225 196% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.