Some people believe politician should reveal information to people while others believe the should not.
"Politicians should reveal information to the people.", I disagree with this statement, as their is a saying that too much intell is also harmful.
As, it is seen that in many countries media personel are corroupt and they leak out wrong news about the person in the market and he his/she gets defamed. In India the it has time and again proved by the media that the news shown on these channels is not accurate. Lets, take the most recent example the farmers of Punjab are performing a peaceful protest and these organisations show them as terrorists demanding for a different nation Khalistan, or we can look at the most renowned example of fake news is the story of Princess Diana.
Moreover, history has examples that the politically active individuals have been in grave danger if their performing good deeds. John F. Kennedy, Indira gandhi, Mahatma gandhi, etc. So, we they require protection and their families are also in danger therefore, personal information about these guys should not be disclosed.
Furthermore, releasing excessive details about an important personality in public can be harmful as the data can be used by enemy nations or terrorists against that person which futher leads to be against the entire nation.
To conclude, we can say that releasing excessive information is harmfull for the person himself, nation and the people too as they can be manipulated to take the wrong decisons by presenting fake news.
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| 2020-12-21 | karanthatai | 33 | view |
| 2019-09-02 | Star2 | 50 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 240.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0875 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82466504897 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9869321949 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868495239837 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326821114105 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533162473873 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582955812761 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578970469836 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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