Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
What's the world we live in on earth? For centuries, scientists have made a great number of remarkable discoveries about it, which have show us a clear but complicated picture, a paradox leading to public divergent viewpoints about our mysterious world. But, as far as I'm concerned, I deeply believe that scientific discoveries have been helping us unlock the door to the world, because we indeed understand better than our ancestors did and benefit a lot correspondingly.
Today there are numerous enigmas about the world, how much scientists have done their utmost to unveil its mysteries, how m...
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Hello, I have one question
Hello, I have one question about this topic: I's not sure whether or not this passage accords with the requirements of the topic. Thanks a lot. I'm sorry I'm not the VIP.
The issues of the essay are
The issues of the essay are that there are a lot of examples. The examples are used to support the arguments. We can't put them separately as paragraphs.
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For GRE issue essays, better always support/against one side but compare two sides. We may consider TLPE:
T means Time: put the argument on a history background to check out it is correct or not. Yes, the world is infinitely complex, but we got better understanding sooner or later.
L means Location: test the argument on different locations/countries/regions. like: space discoveries, deep ocean
P means People: test the argument on people. for example, people who have PHD degree for sure will understand one area better than a person who has only high school degree.
E means Event: we may use Internet as the example.
I owe you my best thanks for
I owe you my best thanks for your sharing knowledge and instruction. I know there are some shortages in my composition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
Whats the world we live in on earth? For cent...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ut our mysterious world. But, as far as Im concerned, I deeply believe that scient...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e numerous enigmas about the world, how much scientists have done their utmost to un...
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Line 11, column 275, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... conclusion, however complex the world, Im sure that mankind will be able to uncov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => OK
Preposition: 100.0 58.6224719101 171% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3805.0 2235.4752809 170% => OK
No of words: 719.0 442.535393258 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29207232267 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17824056563 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96920748647 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 388.0 215.323595506 180% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539638386648 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 1195.2 704.065955056 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.178481967 60.3974514979 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.2 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.76 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276928507047 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770609929909 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652178737255 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15503810382 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788826628246 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 209.0 100.480337079 208% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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