Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Science has indeed given us a more enlightened view of the world around us. The statement also asserts that there are people who believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever knew. It is merely because of the perception of these people that they find the world complex. Several reasons can be given to support that scientific discoveries has indeed simplified our world.
To begin with, anything unknown and new to knowledge always seems to be infinitely complex. It is the precarious paths ahead that daunt the peripatetic. Once things are well understood by people they never find it complicated, but edifying. Take for an example, parochial view of earth as being flat was immensely accepted. It was merely the narrow minded thinking which made people believe that earth is not round and it is the center of universe. They found Aristotle's claims complicated to assimilate. Thus they too disparaged science and averred that science only complicates things as we know.
Secondly, in terms of medical science, one can allege that frequent research and study reveal facts that rival each other. Like, whether to drink coffee or not, is running good for health or bad for knees in long term, does polished grains increase life span or they cause blood pressure problems etc. But, can they deny that all these researches and studies have increased the average life expectancy as compared to decades ago when people died of trite diseases like malaria and chicken pox.
Moreover, in terms of technology and space exploration, one can say that it was a better world when we only dreamed of flying in the sky, as the possibility that other planets can be colonized has made us ignore the sufferings of our own mother nature, the earth. However, they cannot daunt the fact that space exploration has given us profound understanding of how the world was created and why is it the way it is. This field might not prove itself to be of much use in present, but its future is promising, one can aver that the possibility of being able to travel to other universe and colonizing their gives only a benign feeling.
Additionally, technology has made us dedicate our time to more productive tasks than the chores of daily basis. This availability of leisure time made it possible for us to sit and give thought to how lives are changed by science. The seamless incorporation of technology into our daily lives made life easier for us. Conversely, think of the times when researches took months only to go through all the books in library. This era of internet is only proving that human are now a days more aware of the world around them. Our cognition of world is slowly reveling itself from the layers of abstraction that nature put on it.
Conclusively, on the basis of contrast in lives that people lead 100 years ago and the lives they lead now we can compel that science has only simplified the universe for us. And the areas that appear complex are yet to be explored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 33.0505617978 200% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2504.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 523.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78776290631 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52943942901 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523900573614 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0699285294 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.16 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.92 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334073503133 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906593846619 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10852138407 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174551703473 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155197901005 0.0667264976115 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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