Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The statement linking scientific discoveries positively with an enhanced understanding of the world and the complexity around us plays on human evolution and recent human experience. Surely, there been no time in history that the understanding and complexity of the world has been understood through the perspective of science. A quick reflection on the advancement of science revels how science has allowed us to expand our knowledge from knowing that matter makes up everything around us to the idea that the human body is a machine that functions because of interactions between a number of different systems. Science is the study that has allows an increase in human lifespan due to the accumulated knowledge resulting in treatments for diseases such as cancer, dementia, and many more. With science comes research, that questions, hypothesis, experiments, and concludes answers to questions that allow us to expand our knowledge in ways that result in more questions. Moreover, science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex then we realized but this is only because of the understanding of the world. Understanding the world around us and complexity are both correlated positively, without having a keen understanding of all aspect of the world one would not value the complexity.
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- Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.Write a response in which you 33
- Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.Write a response in which you 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1053, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...at the world is infinitely more complex then we realized but this is only because of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29326923077 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07995268517 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2577127364 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.285714286 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354003026507 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171088296047 0.0831039109588 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105734802829 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354003026507 0.150359130593 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.