A person should be able to differentiate between what is right and what is wrong for society, irrelevant of the cause that prompt this decision. People having out of world IQ level are involved in criminal activities. This prompt talks about the foundation of eduction. Some people suggest the morality should be foundation while others favour logical reasoning over morality. According to me both morality and logical reasoning should be foundation of education for a functioning of society. let me explain it by two reasons.
First of all, if having sound moral values was enough for running a society, then why do we hear , now and than, new of sexual abuses by the 'leaders' of the societies, who calls themselves the moral guides, appointed by god to protect the good name of societies. They considered themselves holier than thou and can do anything to the common people.
Secondly, people who believe in teaching a foundation of logical reasoning, may have forgotten the crimes conducted by 'well educated' minds in history. For instance, Osama bin Laden was engineer with degree in civil engineering. He was well educated and said to be have sound logical reasoning. There are ample of examples in history, where a person deprived of moral value has used their life for decimation.
To sum up, morality and logical reasoning both are equally important for creation of a moral society.
Without imparting moral value, educating about logical reasoning is not going to create a balance and vice versa. Hence both should be given consideration for foundation of education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...favour logical reasoning over morality. According to me both morality and logical reasoning sho...
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...orality and logical reasoning should be foundation of education for a functioning of socie...
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Suggestion: Let
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: then
... society, then why do we hear , now and than, new of sexual abuses by the leaders of...
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Suggestion:
...or creation of a moral society. Without imparting moral value, educating about l...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ing to create a balance and vice versa. Hence both should be given consideration for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11196911197 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73412578112 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5756175005 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2666666667 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294173384982 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996296403354 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876987823618 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162422647409 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568248896721 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.