Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city. Which do you prefer ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city.

Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Today, many people migrate from village to big cities in hope a decent job and a better life. immigration from a small place

such as a rural area to a big city has its own problems, although an immigrant cope with the condition of the big city.

Some people choose cities to live in because of more modern facilities and amenities. Although cities don’t have the rest

and quietude of the villages but some people prefer a better job and a more opportunities to live in peace and good weather.

Some of people, despite their desire, merely choose to live in big cities, just because of their children. Because their villages

are not much educated in comparison to cities. The same trend leads to an over growing population of cities and the big

cities cannot responsive to their citizen’s needs.

For example, in some schools in big cities of Iran, because of the lack of enough capacity in the classrooms, the number of

students in excessive, and this has an effect on the progress of students.

As a result, there should be enough facilities in the villages to maintain a living position and people will not find a way to

move to big cities to find a better job and life.

Votes
Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some people prefer to settle down and st...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Immigration
...in hope a decent job and a better life. immigration from a small place such as a rural ...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter life. immigration from a small place such as a rural area to a big city has i...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Such
...ife. immigration from a small place such as a rural area to a big city has its o...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...f more modern facilities and amenities. Although cities don't have the rest...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...Although cities don't have the rest and quietude of the villages but some pe...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: And
...ugh cities don't have the rest and quietude of the villages but some peopl...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
...s to live in peace and good weather. Some of people, despite their desire, merely choose to...
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Line 13, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cities, just because of their children. Because their villages are not much educate...
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Line 13, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...f their children. Because their villages are not much educated in comparison to c...
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Suggestion: Are
...ir children. Because their villages are not much educated in comparison to citi...
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Line 15, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...growing population of cities and the big cities cannot responsive to their citize...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Cities
...ng population of cities and the big cities cannot responsive to their citizen&apos...
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Line 19, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...apacity in the classrooms, the number of students in excessive, and this has an e...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Students
...ty in the classrooms, the number of students in excessive, and this has an effect on...
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Suggestion: Move
...n and people will not find a way to move to big cities to find a better job and ...
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Line 25, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g cities to find a better job and life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 247.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7975708502 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53199299815 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51012145749 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.570724143 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1538461538 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.97078651685 262% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38506547546 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18550598471 0.0831039109588 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193072818445 0.0758088955206 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146567735704 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.219625563344 0.0667264976115 329% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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