Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information Others think access to much information creates problems Which view do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Internet consists of all the information regarding every topic. Be it Wikipedia, that has replaced old books or the Youtube that has become a platform with numerous 'Do it yourself videos' to teach everyone, novel ideas and skills. The prompt introduces a debate on whether access to excess information on the internet is boon or a bane. I believe, that the information obtained from internet is very useful and even if it is in excess; does not mean we can't control it. The benefits of information obtained from internet overweight the disadvantages related to it because of the following three reasons.
Firstly, almost all the information is available on the internet today, leading to a dependency on this platform; be it students who search articles for their thesis or a person looking for a new job. From tiny to huge, all the information can be easily accessed within seconds. People usually use search engines to reach the information by employing an easy process. For instance, if someone wants to attend an event, they will search the respective event details on Google (a popular search engine) and will book the tickets as well, for that event online. Such facilities are present online for numerous activities nowadays. This example describes how the information from the internet has simplified lives. Internet has added comfort to people’s lives today, compared to earlier generations, as there were hardly any information and data present online.
Furthermore, photos and videos that people used to store in laptops earlier can be uploaded over the internet now. Hence, not only someone else's information but a person's own information can be accessed online. For example, many organizations have facilitated cloud technology that allows people to upload the data online for either free or minimal charges, saving space in their laptops. This facilitates makes storing huge amount of data in the same place, possible. This is a great example of how we can, not only access some crucial information required for day to day work but also our own data online through latest technology.
Lastly, a lot of information on the internet helps people save money. When people do not know how to perform a task, they can just search all the details over the internet, regarding how that task can be performed step by step. For instance, as per a new research conducted in USA, almost 90 percent of women try to learn cooking by watching videos over Youtube. It is definitely a great way to learn new things. Apart from this example there are many other skills that can be learned from the internet; students do certification online and learn coding these days to enhance their skills and get a good job or promotion. Such applications of information present online, makes it worth some risks associated with it related to security and authenticity.
Some people may argue that, too much access to information online has many risks as well, such as theft of people's band details such as signatures and passwords, but aren't there at least some problems associated with everything that provides comfort. All the technical inventions and discoveries always have their merits and demerits. It is on us how we compare the both. Usually, if merits of a facility outshine the demerits then it is considered successful. Although, instances such as any personal information theft on the internet are rare, yet government has taken so many measures and constantly working towards improving the security in future.
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| 2021-07-10 | megha tomar | 62 | view |
| 2021-07-09 | megha tomar | 54 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 453, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...en if it is in excess; does not mean we cant control it. The benefits of information...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
... not only someone elses information but a persons own information can be accessed online....
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Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...almost 90 percent of women try to learn cooking by watching videos over Youtube. It is ...
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Line 7, column 548, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to code'.
Suggestion: to code
...dents do certification online and learn coding these days to enhance their skills and ...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...s such as signatures and passwords, but arent there at least some problems associated...
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Line 9, column 643, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... working towards improving the security in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, look, may, regarding, second, so, then, well, apart from, at least, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2941.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 579.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07944732297 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90534594407 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73928937663 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509499136442 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 933.3 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.507628676 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.035714286 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6785714286 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269115879744 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759949164733 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650363631064 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160835795305 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188511063754 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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