State your agreement or disagreement with the statement of Mr. Rajeev Kumar that a Nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Use specific examples and situations to support your answer.
Yes, I agree with this statement that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Because as we know the current scenario of our world that technology has overtaken all our lives to literally its full extent. So, this is something that our current and upcoming young generation need to understand from its foundation to its basic utilities. Because nowadays, most of the jobs require someone who understands the technical utilities of the appliances or software have been provided by the company to assist them. So, they can use them to work more precisely and in a more productive manner.
Because from the past 15-20 years this world has become more global in productive or growth manner. Now, the growth or standards of human life is not limited to its country now, it's about everyone. There are may a lot of disadvantages of the technology but somewhere it is the reason for the great life we are living right now. So, technology plays a very big part of our lives. So, this is something should not limited to the science pursing students. It should be teach to the intermediate level So, people can use and understand the upcoming technology.
Mr Rajeev Kumar, known as the waterman in India, is the reason for resurrection of the 1100 villages. He managed to resurrect the dead rivers and aquifers of the endangered village soil and somehow able to make it fertile enough to grow the crops again. He was not an engineer or biologist. He was just an Ayurvedic doctor. So, this example is more than enough to teach us how a simple education is necessary for you in high school or intermediate level. Because as our world growing old day by day because of human-made activities So, it's our responsibility to take care of our world. For which we need knowledge and assistance of the technology.
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems. 54
- The young generation should be prepared to take over the leadership of the government. 50
- The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. 50
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 64
- the best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al curriculum until they enter college. Because as we know the current scenario of our ...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...life is not limited to its country now, its about everyone. There are may a lot of ...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'limit'
Suggestion: limit
...lives. So, this is something should not limited to the science pursing students. It sho...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taught'?
Suggestion: taught
... science pursing students. It should be teach to the intermediate level So, people ca...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n. He was not an engineer or biologist. He was just an Ayurvedic doctor. So, this ...
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Line 5, column 537, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ay because of human-made activities So, its our responsibility to take care of our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76851851852 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69011715363 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2496363119 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 5.21951772744 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16906498072 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519687753944 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1167362765 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115195607318 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100055020795 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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