Success, whether academic or professional, involves an ability to survive in a new environment and, eventually, to change it.
Every human experiences many ups and downs in his life. Some phase of his life may be fruitful to him, while some may not be. To survive with those struggling times, he should have a support. That support is surely success . No matter where we travel, wherever we go one thing that can keep us safe is success . I strongly agree with the statement that Success , whether academic or professional, involves an ability to survive in a new environment and, eventually, to change it.
Any scholastic accomplishment will help us survive in this ever changing world. With the help of this , we can have a secure job which can make us financially stable. An achievement in any field will also make us economically independent. We will not have to dependent on others for our every need . For instance, women in beginning years faced a lot of harassment . Nowadays , they have started becoming educated and ultimately, their situation has become better.
Education makes us aware of our rights. We will not be fooled by any random person we meet. We have the knowledge of what is legal and what is not. Due to this , it becomes less probable for us to get cheated by others. For example, during early years workers were exploited by rich people. Workers were paid less than their actual salary and during the time of their loans they were told to give more than the real amount . All this was happening because they were not educated.
A successful person always gets respect from the society. A certain kind of self-respect develops among educated people. We ourselves have felt the difference while talking to an educated and an illiterate person. Suppose, we have always observed that a professor of a university , especially in United States , always receives respect . In some countries, the president feels obliged when he meets an successful author .
Some people may argue that there are many entrepreneurs in the world like Steve Jobs who do not have a professional success , many actors in Hollywood and Bollywood do not hold any academic accomplishment , but still the have done well in their fields. To answer such questions, education makes our lives and paths easier. We have seen the success of these celebrities but not their struggle. If they would have been educated they would have faced less struggle. Any startup , business , even film industry etc are unpredictable. We are unsure about what will come next. But a professional or academical accomplishment is the only thing that is permanent. For example , there were two Indian cricketers , one was Sunil Grover and another one was Kapil Dev. Bot started and got retired from their carrier at same time . Sunil Grover is now working as a software engineer in second best software company while Kapil Dev is not pursuing any professional job. This is the power of education . We only retire when we want to.
To sum up, we should understand the need of scholastic achievements . It is that kind of support which can never be stolen by anyone from us . It remains with us till eternity. It makes us empowered and independent , especially for women .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2567.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88022813688 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73673980562 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534220532319 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 825.3 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 6.24550561798 320% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.2370786517 198% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0385751495 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.175 118.986275619 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.15 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.425 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15496991343 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350056964242 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869639187273 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818838251413 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945498729398 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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